Could you correct this plz? Im going to talk about myself a little bit today. I was born in Hokkaido and raised up there. I was working in Japan for three years after graduating from the university. And last year I lived in Canada for around a year which had been my dream since I was a university student. I was so happy to be there and really enjoyed that time. I went to a school to get license to teach English for kids and I actually taught English to Egyptian children. So through the life in Canada, Ive realized that I always feel happy when I use English or talking to foreigners. Actually Ive been trying to be flight attendant since I came back to Japan, but Ive realized that I want to focus on teaching conversational English. I would like to tell Japanese that English is fun and its the most amazing part to be able to understand foreigners. Im looking forward to meet you! Thank you.

Is this English correct? 自然と良い人々ほどパワーをくれるものはない。 Nothing is better than natures and good people to have energy.

Hi could you guys correct this note plz?Ⅱ ⑩Bring to the boiled on maximum heat. After the water boiled, turn the heat to medium and boil potatoes for 16mins. Sting a bamboo skewer into them to make sure if they are cooked or not. If you can sting easily, it’s time to turn off the heat. Bring them in a sink, and keep pouring water to cool them. After they are cooled, put them in Tupperware and remove water. 11. Greet "Ira syaimase" to customers cheerfully when they come in the restaurant with a big smile. Check how many people they are and accompany them to a proper table. Serve water first, and tell them call servers when they decide their orders When customers call you, come to their table and get their orders Tell chefs the orders When customers leave the restaurant, greet "Arigatou gozaimasu". After that, clean the tables and reset for next customers 12.Prepare a pressure cooker to fill with water and caramel sauce. Cook it on high at the beginning, and when the lid starts to rattle, steam for about 60mins on low heat. After that, move them to a stainless steel tray to cool down. 13.Wash lemons with water Cut off the both of sides of them. Cut in half first and cut them in quarter. (If lemons are a little small, cut in a third.) Cut off the part of white, and remove seeds. Cut across in half. 14.・Sugar 270g ・Soy sauce 700g Prepare a large flying pan. Put sugar 270g and heat it on low. Turn up the heat a little when sugar melt. Add soy sauce a little by little when sugar is boiling. Stir until they will be liquid. 15.Put beef in the boiled water. Separate meat with tongs and skim the foam. Make sure that meat will be boiled perfectly. Thats everything! Thank you!

Hi could you guys correct this note plz? Hi. Im making a manual in English for a restaurant which will open overseas. So i would like you guys to correct those sentences right grammar. This is a little hassle i guess, but i would really appreciate if someone can check them! Thanks! ①Insert a bamboo skewer in a chicken’s surface from bottom to the end going through inside and pull it out from the top. Make sure to make chicken’s skin tight without any waves like a picture. These are bad examples ・The bamboo skewer doesn’t go through inside. ・The bamboo skewer doesn’t sting skin from the bottom. ・Skin has waves. ・The bamboo skewer is pulling out too much from the top. ②Cool down boiled eggs with water. Throw water away after cool down. Shake a blunted pot to crash eggs. Peel the shell of them. Cut them in half and put them in stainless containers. ③Put carrots into a blunted pot and heat it. When the water boils, turn the heat to medium and cover with a lid. Steam them for about 40mins. If you can sting a bamboo skewer easily it’s time to turn off the heat. After cool down with water, move them to Tupperware and write the date when you’re done it. ④Put same amounts of potatoes, carrots and pumpkins of customers into a fryer when customers visit. When servers get orders, deep fry rest of vegetables and also cook mains. Plate them on dishes. After curry boil, put it in dishes. ⑤Cut avocados lengthwise in half and take seeds out. Cut them lengthwise in half again, remove skins. Slice them into 8mm wide. ⑥Take 2 Kushiyaki chickens from a fridge, and put them into boiled oil. When the color of chicken’s skin turn to brown, take them out from oil. Put a cover on them, and put in a microwave oven. Heat them at 800W for 1min and 20 secs. After that, grill them over charcoal fire until the skin will be crunchy. *4 Kushiyaki chickens -1min and 40 secs. ⑦Cut a pumpkin in half. Cut there(will put pics to explain) to take out seeds and fibers easily. After that, cut them in 1cm wide. Put them in ziplocks, and write the date when you’re done it. ⑧Put chicken legs in a pot the before the day you boil. Fill with water and leave them to thaw Next day, put 8g of salt, ◯g of garlic and ◯g of soy sauce for 1L. Turn on the oven to be boiled. Skim the foam. Put 5 bay leaves Steam for 1 hour on low heat After 1 hour, turn off the heat and leave it for 90 mins. ⑨Deep fry lamb in oil for a little until the color slightly changed. Grill them over charcoal fire but not to be hard.

please correct it! My brother and his coworkers just have released this video introducing one of the small town in Japan called "Kushiro", which is located eastern in Hokkaido.(Hokkaido is one of prefecture located top of Japan.) He actual appears in this video! The guy wearing a glass is my brother. I know that Japan is quite known as pop culture, advanced technologies or like kind of stuff, but also they've got lots of beautiful natures and nature activities as well which are quiet similar to Canada! I just want you guys who are living out of Japan to know about this town. Plz check this out! Hey guys! Thank you for seeing my notebook. If anybody can correct this whole sentences way to better, I would really appreciate!

correct plz! to say thank to all of my friends! It’s been a yeah and a month since I got to Canada. I’ve met many lovely, sweet, crazy people here and seen them off as well. Now it’s my turn. Time to go back to Japan. Thank you very much to everyone that I’ve met in Banff and Vancouver. I was blessed to spend time with you all! Still can’t believe I’m leaving here. Especially the life in Banff where mostly I spent my time, it was an adventure and stimulate all the time. Thank you for good time. Anyways, big thanks again and hope we can catch up soon! Bye bye! ↓ It’s been a year and a month since I came to Canada. I’ve met many lovely, sweet and crazy people here and seen them off as well. Now it’s my turn. Time to go back to Japan. Thank you very much to everyone that I’ve met in Banff and Vancouver. I was blessed to spend time with you all! Still can’t believe I’m leaving here. Especially the life in Banff, where I spent most of my time, was an adventure and stimulating always. Thank you for the good times. Anyways, big thanks again and hope we can catch up soon! Bye bye!

check plz Its been a week since I left Banff and just has started new life in new place. I couldn't say thank you and good bye face to face to some of my friends so I'll do it here instead. Thank you so much for everyone that Ive met in Banff. Im blessed to spend time with these crazy...lovely people in there. You guys made my Canada life!! Many thanks and see you next time Banff!! *Thank you for seeing my notebook. I think this is kinda messy sentences so i would really appreciate if someone can give me some advice to make it looks much better. I will post under Facebook and I want to tell my feeling for my friends as good as I can. Thanks!!

to my coworker 2 You always take care of us and try to be involved me in a group, even tho i can’t understand English and I have been recognizing about it. I love your this behavior and also am really appreciate it! Also I love your easy-going, always energetic, treat everyone as an equal and such a loud voice.lol You have lots of things which I don’t have. You taught me not only lots of slangs but also some important stuff which I need in my life. Like, "let is go" and "Be relax". Oviously I’m getting be a Canadian now.haha Seriously, you seem like my biggest brother. (I have three older brother in Japan, but now you are the oldest one.) When you find a hot guy who is like Paul Walker, let me know asap:)