please correct it!

My brother and his coworkers have just have released this video introducing one of the small towns in Japan called "Kushiro", which is located to the eastern, in Hokkaido.(Hokkaido is one of the prefectures located at the top of Japan.) He actual appears in this video! The guy wearing a glass (do you mean ‘glasses’?) is my brother. I know that Japan is quite [This is correct, but I think ‘well’ sounds better] known as pop culture, with advanced technology [Usualy, technology is singular, even when it looks like it should be plural] or and like that kind of stuff, but also they've got lots of beautiful natures  [This is grammatically correct, but doesn’t sound right. I would say something like: “Japan has lots of beautiful wildlife and many natural wonders] and nature activities as well, which are quiet quite similar to Canada! I just want you guys who are living out of Japan to know about this town. Plz check this out!

Ayano, 

You write very well! Keep up the good work!

P.S. Also, nature is (almost) never plural. Just something to keep in mind

My brother and his coworkers have just  released this video introducing one of the small towns in Japan called "Kushiro", which is located eastern in Hokkaido.(Hokkaido is one of prefecture located top of Japan.) He actuallyappears in this video! The guy is wearing a glass who's my brother. I know that Japan is quite known as pop culture, advanced technologies or like kind of stuff,  and son, but also Japan has got lots of beautiful natures and nature activities as well which are quiet similar to Canada! I just want you guys who are living out of Japan to know about this town. Plz check this out!


Hey guys! Thank you for seeing my notebook. If anybody can correct this whole sentences way to better, I would really appreciate!