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    不够的时间   时间不够   
    今天,我想提高我的中文水平今天     (improve means 提高...的水平、能力 )
    但这不可能的了     
    因为 我有其他的事 职责     
    下班后我做了饭            (Is this happened? If not ,  add 要before做, if yes,add 了 after 做)
    提别 做的主要是土豆和或米饭   
    cooked rice we call it 米饭 ,uncooked  rice calls 大米.   the word “or” can't translate into “或”,because the cooked  has happened , you actually know what was cooked today .
    而且,我还要清理我的公寓平面      也means the same as the people before .  而且means “furthermore”,can make a better sentence cohesion
    很难找到学习的时间啊,对吧? 


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    March 8, 2017
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