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中文的写练习：虽然我学中文，但是我怀疑我会去中国旅游 （二零一八年三月二十八日）
中文的写作练习：虽然我学中文，但是我觉得我不会去中国旅游（二零一八年三月二十八日）
怀疑：suspect， 这里用觉得会比较合适。
今年我要讲为什么我怀疑我会将来去中国旅游。现在，你可能问自己为什么《如果你觉得你从来会去中国旅行，为什么你要学中文？》我已经在一个以前的练习文章解释我学中文的理由。简单地说，我一天要帮助我两个女孩学中文。今天我要讲为什么我不会去中国旅游。现在，你可能会问如果你不想去中国旅游，你为什么要学中文？我已经在以前的文章中解释过为什么我学习中文。简单地说，我要帮助两个女孩学中文。
1. the punctuation << >>, this is only for the book name.
2. I rewrote these sentences based on your meaning. from my learning experience, i like the rewritten sentences, because i can learn the language which is native. so I hope it can help.
这个上午，我读了一个其他中文学生的练习文章。他说了《今天在北京空气污染非常差》这提醒我为什么对我去中国不是一个妙思。我二十一岁的时候，我开始了抽烟。一年后左右，我发展跟我的肺一个健康问题。虽然我放弃抽烟，但是我继续有跟我的肺问题。看起来我放弃抽烟太迟了。今天上午， 我读了一个中文学生的文章。 他说北京今天的空气质量非常差/北京的空气污染非常严重。这就是为什么去中国不是一个好主意。
1.This morning，通常翻译成今天早晨/上午，这个是语言习惯。
2. 《》
3.good idea 翻译成好主意，妙思 is understandable, but not native
4.空气质量非常差/北京的空气污染非常严重 fixed phrases
我21岁的时候开始抽烟。一年以后，我的肺出了问题。虽然我戒烟了，但是我的肺仍然有问题，似乎/看起来是我戒烟太晚了。我二十一岁的时候，我开始了抽烟。you don't need two subjects for this sentence.
我发展跟我的肺一个健康问题。发展 does not match 健康问题。
戒烟 is a fixed phrase.
医生告诉我了我有哮喘。因为中国有一个严重的空气污染问题，所以我怀疑去中国不是一个妙思，真是遗憾！医生告诉我， 我得了哮喘。因为中国的空气污染严重， 所以我觉得去中国不是一个好主意。 真是遗憾！
得了哮喘. 得了+disease eg. 得了感冒，得了胃病
怀疑，妙思 不对
我觉得中国是已非常有趣的国家。中国有很多的文化，和有一个长的历史。我要发现更多关于中国和它的文化，但是我觉得我必须在网上做了。我觉得中国是一个非常有趣的国家。中国有很多的文化和悠久的历史， 我要去了解更多的中国文化。但是我觉得我只能再网上了解了。
历史 is uncountable in Chinesechinese I think。 we usually say 有悠久的历史
但是我觉得我必须在网上做了。必须--只能， must---can only。
0 votedMarch 29, 20181- Zootopia (part 2) (Zootopia Part2) Judy followed the suspicious fox into the elephant cafe. She found that the fox only wanted to buy an elephant ice cream for his son because the little fox liked everything about the elephant. But the elephant rejected to sell any ice cream to them. Judy stepped forward and showed her badge to the elephant. She said:”you cannot treat your customers in this way. It is discrimination.” The elephant gave in and sold an elephant ice cream to the father and his son, but the father fox realised that he had forgotten his wallet. Judy didn’t want to disappoint the little fox again. So she paid for the ice cream and told the little fox that if he wanted to be an elephant, he could be an elephant because it was Zootopia. They introduced themselves to each other before they went their separate way. In the late of this day, Judy saw the foxes again in the distance. But she spotted that they were melting the huge ice cream. They put the syrup in the jags and made a lot of tiny ice creams. They made a lot of money by selling the tiny ice creams to lemmings. What was worse, Judy found that the son was an adult fox. They cheated on her. Judy was furious and confronted Nick, “I stood up for you, and you lied to me.” Nick smiled and asked:” is it illegal, sweetheart?”. He continued to say that you could only be what you were, dumb bunny and then left. Judy was left to watch him going away because she was stuck in the wet cement.March 29, 201810
- Zootopia (part 1) Today I would like to tell a story about Zootopia, a Disney movie. I like this movie very much, the diligent bunny and the smart fox. There was a city, named Zootopia, where all the animals lived together in harmony. But many years ago, fanged predators had always terrorised meek preys. Little Judy had a dream that when she grew up, she wanted to be a police officer in Zootopia. On her school show, she said I would be a police officer in Zootopia in the future, because in Zootopia “ Everyone can be anything.” Judy worked harder than anyone else in Police Academy and graduated at the top of her class. She got her first job in ZPD (Zootopia Police District). Judy enjoyed everything around her in Zootopia, because everything was new and attractive for her. On her first day at work, she found that she was the first bunny police officer in Zootopia. She was surrounded by larger animals, such as the elephant, the lion, the hippo and so on. Judy was upset when she was told her assignment was parking duty, while other colleagues took responsibilities for the missing mammals' cases. She suggested I should take one case. But Chef Bogo seemed to look down upon her. When she was doing her parking duty, she found a suspicious fox, looking around the street before entering an ice cream shop. Judy followed him unconsciously because she thought foxes were sly.February 28, 201830
- An understanding of learning and teaching (please help me correct my writing, thanks) In my opinion, teaching and learning is not the conception of what happens in the classroom. Teaching and learning is the reason why human can keep developing. Before written language created, teaching is to set up an example to the young generation, aimed to pass on experience, while learning is to acquire how to survive in the tough environment (fight against other animals and nature) and explore the world by what they have learned. In the modern society, the essence of teaching and learning seems not change. Teaching is still to pass on experience, including knowledge, methods and values. Teaching is also, I think, to arouse enthusiasm and creativity. On the other hand, learning is to acquire the experience and make the best of them, because learners need to deal with issues around them, such as environmental degradation. However, due to the fast development of our society, teaching and learning is becoming more complicated and diverse. I am becoming confused.February 26, 201860
"Useless" Language
大家好 ! 好想好久没写这小文章，我应该练习
从我是中学生的时候, 我好想成为那些人的能说一口流利很外文 (我好想成为那些能说一口流利外语的人.)，因为我觉得看起来很棒(我觉得那很棒）。所以我努力学习韩文和中文。当然了，我不是只对语言感兴趣，也喜欢学不同的文化。
一天，我弟弟问我: 你为什么学没用的外文（外语）? 然后他加了（他接着说）: 你该学真有用的外文（外语），比如西班牙语。
其实他这么说的时候我有一点生气了， 因为我真爱好（喜欢）学习外文（外语）和外国的文化。要是只学一个外文因为我以为它有用没，那我不能好好学呢。（can not understand the meaning）但是大部分地(某种程度上）他说得对了，有些外文比其他外文更重要的。
比如非常有可能您相信英语有大用（你可能认为英语很有用），其实我也是这么认为。我母语是英语，可是我不觉得其他语言不重要。
可能西班牙语比中文和韩国语（that is not a sentence)。我的意思是在美国人的说中文还是(和）韩国语比人的（比）说西班牙语的数字（人）更少。（i prefer to say like: 我的意思是， 在美国说中文和韩语的人比说西班牙语的人更少）
可是我对中国和韩国有兴趣，并且按我的想法中文是重要的语言。
不好意思，我的中文水平太烂了，好像我的错误很多
多谢看我的文章 :))你的文章还不错，意思表达的也清晰，就是有些表达不是很地道。
tips：
外文，通常指外国的文字， 而你学习的不仅仅是文字，而是一门语言， 所以说学习外语比学习外文更准确一些。
我好想成为那些人的能说一口流利很外文 based on your meaning , you can say, 我好想成为那些能说一口流利外语的人. in chinese attribute is placed before the noun.
然后他加了（他接着说）you translate "add" derectly, into “加”， but i think "接着说" could be the native expression.
比如非常有可能您相信英语有大用（你可能认为英语很有用）， your thought is " for example, it is possible that you believe english is useful" but the word order is different in Chinese.
我希望我的修改对你有帮助。加油
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