Make Sentences

Could you please help me to revise the following sentences, thank you.

1. His career took off after he worked hard for 10 years.
2.The airplane will take off in 10 minutes.
3.Mary told me that she will take off early today.
4.Adam set up an organization for poor children.
5.So far, I don't see any improvement in the economics.
6.Studying English allowed me to learn about the other cultures.
7.Ninety percent of my college classmates are men.
8.Most of the earnings are from the investment.
9.When I was young, I was interested in finance and investment.
10.His career is very successful.
11.Without his assistance, I don't think I could finish the marathon.

Thank you for your help.

CORRECTIONS: Who is reading a book on the history now? --> Who is reading a book on history now? What is name that boy who playing chess with my daughter? --> What is the name of that boy who is playing chess with my daughter? Who will buy tickets on this new movie? --> Who will buy tickets for this new movie? What pictures are there best of the best in the gallery? --> Which pictures are the best in the gallery?

*I had to guess what you were trying to say with some of the sentences, so anything with a (?) next to it i am not 100% sure if this is the point you were trying to get across*

What I thought of the movie "Wolverine: Logan"

At the beginning, when I saw Logan, pale faced, limping, and drunk, I felt depressed. I remember he used to be so energetic. Why did the director change this? Then  when (?)the professor was killed, I realized the X-men era was over.  There's nothing left for X-men movie fans to look forward to. (?) Even though it was inevitable, I dreaded the ending. I feel so sad.

Conversationally "reading makes me happy" sounds more fluid. "To read makes me happy" you'd hear less often in everyday conversation, but you might come across it in formal writing.

Letter talking about TV program

Hello friend,

How are you? I'm glad to hear from you again.

I'm writting this letter to tell you that I saw a wonderful TV program about football yesterday. During this TV program you can watch the goals of all of the matches of the first division. It's on tv every monday at 10 PM. I recommend you watch this TV program because if you miss a match you can see the goals of that match during this program. If you'd like to watch other sports, there is another program at 8 PM which discusses basketball, tennis, etc.

Bye

Alberto

Pet Cemetery 

I recently read a novel by Stephen King called “Pet Cemetery”. It was quite scary and well written; it’s about a family who moves to another city to restart their lives. The main character is Louis, a college worker who doesn’t believe in ghosts and is surprised by how little he knows about life and death.
The main plot focuses on Julian’s life as a doctor in this little town, his friendly neighbors and the death of his cat. As always, King doesn’t disappoint us. He gives us a full story, great characters and a spooky place where pets go to rest.
However, this book shouldn’t be read by kids. There’s a lot of violence, explicit scenes and obscene language. And most of all, it’s one of the scariest books out there. But like all good books, it teaches us several lessons. For example- you should trust and be thankful for your neighbor, and don’t bury your pets in an native american cemetery.
I highly recommend this book, but remember to always keep the lights on while reading it. 

Check it please

Dear Dana,
I have received your letter and think I can help you. I regret that such a problem has appeared in your family. If I were you, first I would talk with your parents one on one. Explain to them the reasons as to why you chose this institute. Help your parents understand that it is your life and it will be interesting for you to pursue your studies with this institute. In the future it will bring you success. Be brave and talk with your parents! I believe in you! I`m sure that all will be okay. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes, Marya.

Hmm I haven't seen anything like this before on supplement/vitamin labels. Usually it will say "serving size: 3 pills". If it says 3 bites, I would assume they mean 3 seperate pieces of the product, which in this case is pills. So I would say your assumption is correct.