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Dear Dana,
I have got your letter and think I can help you. I regret that such problem appeared in your family. If I were you, foremost I would talk with parents one on one. Brought reasons and arguments why I chose this institute. Help your parents to understand that it is your life and it will be interesting for you studies in this institute. In the future it exactly will bring success to you. Don`t experience, be brave and talk with your parents! I believe in you! I`m sure that for you and all will be good. I wait for your answer.
Best wishes, Marya.
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Dear Dana,I have got received your letter and I think I can help you. I regret that such a problem has appeared (arose is a better choice of word than appeared) in your family. If I were you, foremost first I would talk with (my) parents one on one. Brought reasons and arguments why I chose I would have explained to them the reason why have I chosen this institute. Help I would have helped your my parents to understand that it is your life and it will be interesting for you to pursue studies in this institute. In the future, it exactly will bring success to you. Don`t experience fear (Don't be afraid or Don't worry - I guess you mean to use one of these), be brave and talk with your parents! I believe in you! I`m sure that for you and all will be good everything will be okay with you. I will wait for your answer (Or reply).
Best wishes, Marya.
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Dear Dana,I have received your letter and think I can help you. I regret that such a problem has appeared in your family. If I were you, first I would talk with your parents one on one. Explain to them the reasons as to why you chose this institute. Help your parents understand that it is your life and it will be interesting for you to pursue your studies with this institute. In the future it will bring you success. Be brave and talk with your parents! I believe in you! I`m sure that all will be okay. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes, Marya.
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