Do these sentence sound natural?
Hey guys.. yesterday I was talking to some friends on Discord to practice speaking skills and I decided to write down every sentence I said, and I was in doubt if they would sound natural (I mean if a native speaker would express the idea like that). So here they are... and I'd like you guys comment below how you'd express these ideas.
PS.: If I made any mistake in this little intro, feel free to correct me as well haha
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Yeah... I was playing (the guitar) while you were out (he had left to go to the bathroom)
--> Yeah... I was playing guitar while you were in the bathroom
--> "playing" by itself is something a native speaker would never say and make it sounds like you were "playing around" (joking) or "playing with yourself" (masturbating)
--> "while you were out" implies the person was out of the house
The three people room is available right now... we should move there (there were a room/server with 3 vacancies)
--> The three people room is available right now... we should move there (there was a room/server with 3 vacancies)
--> "three person" room sounds more natural than "three people" room but I would never correct you if you were my friend
Everyone was concerned about the possibility of it happening, while watching [or while we watched, or while we were watching] the movie, I mean ... but in the end the movie went <s>through another path</s> [went another way] or [took a different turn] and everyone kinda felt relieved. Because if that had happened I think they'd have simply screwed up the whole story.
That was a heavy movie... I mean, with a very deep emotional load.
--> "load" makes me think of jizz; "emotional load" means something closer to "I have a heavy emotional load at home with my husband working long hours" -- you could say "It had a heavy emotional load" and not make its sound like jizz
--> "it was just really [or very] heavy" or "it was heavy emotionally" would sound natural
--> Or to convey your exact sense idiomatically: "That was a heavy movie...it was an emotional rollercoaster!"
Oh really... the movie was released this year?
--> correct
he is kinda in the middle. He is not the hero, but not the villian as well
--> tricky word to spell, eh?
Have u ever tried to say smth bad about the doctor <s>who for him</s> to see what happens?? (haha he has a friend who only talk about dr. who... he definitely loves it)
--> I hate abbreviations (yes, even with my gaming buddies) but understand why you would use them. smth is a terrible abbreviation, and u is a bad habit (you doesn't take long to type).
They were too bored.. so they were kinda inventing stuff<s>s</s> to do. No matter what it was, they just wanted to move out of <s>borednesss</s> boredom
--> or they just wanted to move out because they were bored
They say it's kinda confusing watching this tv show, cause it has so many timelines
--> correct, though I would either write out because or abbreviate it cus (internet slang), or 'cause (colloquial)
--> cool, what show? I find Altered Carbon confusing because of too many body switches. In fairness I watch it in Spanish, so I miss things sometimes.
hmm the first song I <s>'ve</s> ever learn<s>t</s>ed.... I'm not sure if I remember even what song it was haha --> he's asked me if I still know how to play the first song <s>I've ever learnt</s> I ever learned and I answered it that way <s>above</s>, but I'd like to know a way of answering it in order to <s>pass</s> convey (or give) the following idea: I can't remember even which song was it, so the chances of still knowing how to play it would be even less<s>er</s>.
--> Your second sentence correctly conveys the meaning that you want to convey.
<s>Is that a big tv show?</s> I mean are there long episodes with many episodes <s>by seasons</s> each season (or in each season).
--> How many episodes does that tv show have? Does it have a lot of seasons? Are the episodes long?
--> Sorry, sometimes you gotta ask more questions, because English adjectives (big) aren't terribly versatile, and all English sentences need that repetitive subject-verb agreement stuff.
I couldn't understand you because your voice was failing (The audio was turning on and off quickl<s>i</s>y)
--> because you were breaking up, because I couldn't understand your voice, because of a bad connection, I can hear you now.
Is that song by Radiohead <s>or not</s>? (I wanted to know if that song was <s>made</s> performed, written, (or just no verb at all) by this band) --> I wanted to know if that song was by the band Radiohead.
--> You would only say "or not" if you're making a "not joke" or if you suddenly are attacked by doubt, as in "Is that song by Radiohead, wait... maybe not? Who's it by again?"
Whoa... so long! and how was that? I mean, you first went there for work/study and ended up staying?
--> correct, nice job
Thank you so much guys for your help and corrections!
--> You're welcome. What game were you playing on Discord? :-)