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I'm an university student majoring in Chinese language and Literature. Thesedays, I'm learning English, Cantonese (a dialect in China) and Japanese. Teaching non-native speakers to learn Chinese is my dream job. I'm willing teach you Chinese language to improve my teaching skills.
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    It is ok to say so. But I think it is more proper to say "听说中国人有很多手机"
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    March 9, 2019
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    Two sentences here waiting for correcting 1.The other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying...... "voices its strong opposition" ----Is this phrase native? 2.Another reason is that exams can easily lead to students' phychological problems. In other word, students face fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. " In other word "-------Is it logical to use this phrase to link these two sentences?
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    Could you please check these sentences for me ? 1.The other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying...... "voices its strong opposition" ----Is this phrase native? 2.Another reason is that exams can easily lead to students' phychological problems. In other word, students face fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. " In other word "-------Is it logical to use this phrase to link these two sentences?
    March 9, 2019
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    HSK5 100题

    昨天我访问(采访)了一位有名的作家。在访问（采访）过程中，她的表情很热情激动、语言很流利、（，）她想说什么都会表示表达得很清楚。我问她怎么可能提高发言语言表达能力。原来她的秘密秘诀很简单——只要多读书，而且多练习发言。


    TIPS:

    1.Be careful about puncuations like comma ( , ) .

    2.It is more native to use 采访 rather than 访问,

    3.表示——show/mean   表达——express

    4.秘密——secret that cannot be told     秘诀——  like good solutions to a problem

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    March 9, 2019
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    我们最喜欢的学校。

    我们最喜欢的学校。

    我非常喜欢我们的学校。我们的学校很大也很新。我们的学校有100个学习汉语的学生。
    我提别(特别)喜欢学习汉语。我们老师叫张丽彩。上课的时候，张老师不仅给我们介绍中国也教我们写汉字。她教我们看书，(X)所以我最喜欢看不同的书。上课的时候张老师问我们很多问题。我和我们的同学都了回答老师的问题。有时我们回答得对，有时回答得错。

    (X)张老师让我们都写汉字写得很好看(张老师让我们都写汉字写得很好看)，但是我汉字写得不太好看。现在我们都准备HSK2考试。考试总会有很多问题，所以我们都要做得很好(更好 make it better)。当（when）我们都做完的时候，就可以休息了。


    1.提—ti  特te

    2.不仅......还  （not only ... but also）

    3.她教我们看书，(X)所以我最喜欢看不同的书。  （this sentence is illogical）  

    better:她教我们看书，而且and我最喜欢看不同的书。  and

    4.有时回答得错    it should“有时候回答错了”。

    得对is native,but 得错 is strange to native speakers, although it's understandable

    5.张老师让我们都写汉字写得很好看------You combine two sentences together in a wrong way.  You'd better divide them into two.

    张老师让我们写汉字。大家都写得很好看。  （it's fine to use 大家everyone.  But "我们WE" includes you）

    6.当（when）我们都做完的时候，就可以休息了。  I suggest you to learn more conjunctions.



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    March 5, 2019
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    Can you modify a sentence for me ? Hospital Road separated six bus stops into two groups, one group on each side of the road. My teacher said,"one group on each side of the road" is lack of verb. Or do you have any idea how to describe the bus stops in the photo?
    March 1, 2019
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    Hello~

    我看病打针的那一天

    我去看病打针的那一天，进入临床室（护士给我打针的房间）的时候，全身已经在多流汗，我咬舌头咬得很紧用力。当我有恐惧症恐惧时，就有咬舌头的习惯。

    “请坐”，医生说，然后我把双手放在卧铺*（I think you can just use the word "bed" 床）上，用双臂来支撑自己坐着就坐一坐，被一身汗水盖着的我等待着打针的来临。“双手要叉腰，别动”。本能让我一瞬间内动一动（动了动）胳膊，我才说：“要我呼吸呼出（呼吸 includes breathe in and out）吗？”医生又说一次：“请别动”。我用几秒的时间来让自己镇静下来。

    为了防止被病毒感染生病，护士在我胳膊上（要打针的地方）的对象部分*涂抹酒精，这酒精冷得让我发起鸡皮疙瘩。因为护士经常做这种事，所以她的动作很敏捷，涂抹完酒精以后就马上把疫苗液体装进去那个塑料管道里面。在我潜意识下（What do you mean?），针的顶端已经碰到了皮肤！


    打针开始，针的顶端还没有破穿皮肤的表层，不过因为皮肤的弹性力，也受到针的压力，而针周围的皮肤出现了一种由上往下的形状*凹陷，针的阴影投射在中间，仿佛中间刚出现的小黑洞将爆炸并吞没埋在皮肤下的神经，让病人因为疼痛体会残酷的休克（休克 is a very dangerous situation. Maybe you can use “疼痛感”. It's the feeling of being injured.）。

    针穿破了皮肤的表层，现在都没有了那个原本因为被弹性力造成的形状，周围的皮肤突然动弹了起来，让针继续往下面（走、深入 go deep inside）去。当护士感觉针触碰了肌肉 (正中的一部分)一部分正中间的时候，她（注射   attention: 喷射means spray）喷射了所有疫苗，忽然（然后means "then", 忽然 means suddently）就拿开了针并且在由针造成的小洞上放了一块棉花，为避免流出血而长按，以后贴上了一条胶带。

    哇！！！打针完成啦！希望你喜欢我的故事~
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    *不知道我说的“卧铺”对不对，我的意思是这个：https://www.featurepics.com/StockImage/20080717/doctors-office-stock-picture-809717.jpg

    卧铺是交通工具上的床，医院的床直接叫床就行

    *意思：我胳膊上将打针那个具体的地方，护士打算哪里打针，就在哪里涂抹酒精。。。如何表达才最自然？
    在要打针的地方涂酒精

    *由上往下的形状（这个说法有道理吗？）（英文翻译：concave shape, funnel, dimple, pressure point, etc.）：http://www.cimtcollege.com/cimt/images/intramuscular-injections-1.jpg凹陷

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    February 28, 2019
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    Hello~

    我该要用"身体"为题目写一段话。我的语法行不行？

    虽然我真的不是一个苗条的女孩，可是我也不是很胖。妈妈说，我只有些肌肉，有些肥子肥肉（you mean fat?）😅我想减一下肥，还想有健康的饮食。我知道身体好，脑袋就好，所以我多走路，周末跑步，注意牙齿、眼睛、腿脚的健康，保持好姿势(坐姿、站姿)。我个子很矮，肩膀和胳膊有强力气，脸圈形是圆形的，鼻子有点儿大，眉毛和头发是黄色的。


    PS：You should pay more attention to adjectives.

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    February 28, 2019
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    Ielts Cambridge 13 TEXT 1 1 The two maps give information about the road access to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. In 2007, the hospital was surrounded by the Ring Road, which was connected with the Hospital Road. Six bus stops were separated into two groups, one group on each side of the Hospital Road. To the east of the same road, there was a car park for both staff in the hospital and the public. In 2010, three changes had been made. There were two car parks six bus stops around the hospital. The one for the public was located on the east of the hospital while the original car park was only open for staff. Then six bus stops were represented by a newly built bus station, which was connected to the Hospital Road with two paths. These two paths lead to two roundabouts which used to be the junctions between Hospital Road and Ring Road, Hospital Road and City Road. Comparing two maps, there were car parks in 2010 than in 2007 and the bus stops in 2007 were upgraded into a brand new bus station. The junctions of three roads also changed into two roundabouts.
    February 28, 2019
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