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I have visited France a lot but never put any effort in to learning the language. The school system in England is terrible for teaching languages, but hopefully teaching myself will work!

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Why You Should Practice Sports
There are a lot of reasons to practice sports, I'll list some for you:

1) Sports are good for your health. There are many studies that state that for each hour of regular exercise, you gain 2 more hours of life expectancy.

2) Sports make you feel better. When you practice sports, your body releases(?) endorphines, a substance which provides a sensation of wellbeing.

3) Sports makes you fell more disposed (disposed isn't the correct word, do you maybe want to use "determined"?). Do you want to begin the day on the right-foot? Just go out and do some exercise. It can be jogging or running, working out, biking, martial arts... anything! I assure you that you will feel more disposed and willing to work! I know that it doesn't make much sense because logic suggests that you will feel tired, but what happens is exactly the opposite.

4) Sports helps you to make new friends! Do you want new friends? Do sports! You will meet a lot of new people and with the same interests (at least in sports, haha) as you. There are some sports in which it's easier to make friends, like martial arts, crossfit, volleyball, soccer, etc.

5) Sports makes you develop healthy habits. If you do sports and take it seriously, you will probably stop smoking, drink less alcohol and eat less junk food, like fast-foods and soda.

6) Sports are dynamic. You do't have to pratice just one specific sport everyday. You can change it. For example, you can go running on Monday and Wednesday, go swimming on Tuesday and Thursday, and play volleyball on Friday and Saturday. You will never get bored. And if you do, just change the sports!

That's it. I wrote that text, but it doesn't mean that I really love sports, I'm kinda lazy but I'm trying to spend at least 5 hours a week doing something.

See you guys! Have a great weekend.
PS: If anyone is looking for a partner to practice english, just let me know.
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September 8, 2017
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The Great Graphic Novel: Batman Year One
Batman Year One was a graphic novel published in 1987 by Frank Miller and David Mazzucchelli. The story is about Bruce Wayne's first year as Batman. Gotham is a city with many criminals and corrupt police , and the story begins with James Gordon arriving in Gotham. At the same time, Bruce Wayne is arriving too (Maybe "Bruce Wayne also arrives at this time"). Gordon's wife is pregnant. Gordon works with corrupt friends in the police and he needs to protect his family from them. But, this story is about how Bruce Wayne became Batman, and at first he wasn't very careful. He is still learning how doing and save the people ("how to be Batman and save people" maybe?). In some moments I think like "Oh God! He will be killed", but he is Batman and since the beginning he was disposed (more likely to use "determined" than "disposed") to do the right thing no matter what.
This is a great and classic story about Batman and I recommend it for everyone.
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September 8, 2017
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Encore de la pluie Ce matin je me suis levé en retard donc je m'ai du ruer au bureau dans la pluie. Pour le dejeuner, mon colleagues et moi allons sorti au Wetherspoons (un bar). Ce soir je vais sortir au chalet dans le Lake District avec mes amis.
September 8, 2017
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J'ai trop mangé Aujourd'hui on nous a donnés du pizza gratuit à travail et j'ai trop mangé! Je dois continuer à travailler mais je voudrais coucher au lieu. Cependant, c'est presque dix-sept heures, alors je veux sortir bientôt.
September 7, 2017
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Write about learning a language
Now, I am learning English. All my life I have studied English, in school, in high school and in university. But I have a lot of problems learning it. I have tried learn it watching films and reading books, but it's difficult for me. At first, I used a dictionary at all times, but now I have lost the fear and I rarely use it.
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September 6, 2017
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September 6, 2017
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Brazilian independence day.
On September 7th we celebrate our independence day. The day that D. Pedro I freed our land from the portuguese rules ("from Portuguese rule" or from "the Portuguese rulers").
This holiday is a jubilant (not many people use jubilant, maybe joyous?) day for all Brazilian people. There will be many military events, with parades happening across the country. It's a day of celebration.
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September 6, 2017
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Le bloc. Alors, je ne suis pas sortir au bar hier, mes amis etaient trop paresseux! Mais aujourd'hui je vais faire du bloc (un type d'escalade) avec mon ami Remus. Ce soir ma copine arrive à rester chez moi et nous allons sortir au restaurant pour le dîner. Ce week-end nous allons aller à Lake District avec un grand groupe des amis, il fera beau avec espoir!
September 6, 2017
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Five sentences about the heart. Can you correct and explain my mistakes? Thanks
The heart is a vital organ which performs important functions in our body. More and more people are suffering from cardiovascular diseases. Many of these diseases are preventable if people would follow the following recommendations.
First of all, no smoking at all. Moderate consumption of alcohol. Second (we would generally use second rather than secondly), be physically active and avoid stress. Reduce salt intake and be fit (maybe say "exercise more" instead of "be fit").
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September 5, 2017
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My eventful journey
It was long ago, when I was a kid. At that time my father was a sailor. We both love oceans and seas. It was a usual windy autumn day. We intended to get shrimp. Having had our breakfast, we set off to the ocean. Not wanting to get wet, we get dressed properly. The sky was cloudy and the wind was rising. But I wasn't afraid. In my childhood I was never afraid when my dad was near. Feeling excited, we sail farther and farther from the coast. We even almost reached Japan. The more time we spent in the dark endless ocean, the harder the violent storm broke down. I will never ever forget that ocean. It was everywhere. The waters of the ocean were so sinister. The nature was ramping (Not sure what you mean by ramping? Not normal English usage). Noticing that it started to rain, we made our minds up to catch some shrimp and finish that adventure. My dad gave me the helm and pulled out the nets.
But only now do I realize how much my dad had to bear in his mind, and how dangerous it was!
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September 5, 2017
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