Women's soccer

A few days ago, I was wondering if the soccer clubs of my city have female team. Then come  came this notice that only clubs with female team will can participate  will be able to participate the “Libertadores” competition. First I was happy because in the country known as the “soccer country” we will finally value the women’s soccer. Then I realize realized that the smallest teams will be harmed, and those things don’t have to be like that, an obligation. And I see comments of men about  ,this and most are not positive. This situation make  makes me feel sad, I have friends who would like to be a professional player  players and now maybe they can, but not as it should be.

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Tem alguns erros gramaticais que dão um sentido diferente à frase , como na primeira frase , onde você se refere à times , no plural , e depois à time feminino , no singular , dando à entender que todos os times devam ter UM time feminino ,não como se cada um tivesse o seu.