Women's soccer
A few days ago, I was wondering if the soccer clubs of my city have female team. Then come this notice that only clubs with female team will can participate the “Libertadores” competition. First I was happy because in the country known as the “soccer country” we will finally value the women’s soccer. Then I realize that the smallest teams will be harmed, and those things don’t have to be like that, an obligation. And I see comments of men about this and most are not positive. This situation make me feel sad, I have friends who like to be a professional player and now maybe they can, but not as it should be.
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Women's soccer
A few days ago, I was wondering if my city's soccer team had a female team. Then came the news that the only clubs with female teams will be able to participate in the “Libertadores” competition. First I was happy because in the country known as the “soccer country” we will finally value the women’s soccer. Then I realized that the smallest teams will be harmed, and those things don’t have to be like that, an obligation. And I see comments from men about this and most are not positive. This situation make me feel sad, I have friends who would like to be a professional players and now maybe they can, but not how it should be.Você realmente escreveu muito bem! eu só corregi cada erro e mudei algumas frases a um jeito mais natural pra tu ver como dá pra melhorar! Se tu quiser, pode me mandar uma mensagem q seria um prazer te ajudar além desse texto :)
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Women's soccer
A few days ago, I was wondering if the soccer clubs of my city have female team. Then come came this notice that only clubs with female team will can participate will be able to participate the “Libertadores” competition. First I was happy because in the country known as the “soccer country” we will finally value the women’s soccer. Then I realize realized that the smallest teams will be harmed, and those things don’t have to be like that, an obligation. And I see comments of men about ,this and most are not positive. This situation make makes me feel sad, I have friends who would like to be a professional player players and now maybe they can, but not as it should be.Você escreve bem! Keep going!
Tem alguns erros gramaticais que dão um sentido diferente à frase , como na primeira frase , onde você se refere à times , no plural , e depois à time feminino , no singular , dando à entender que todos os times devam ter UM time feminino ,não como se cada um tivesse o seu.
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