我们可以回到从前去吗？

I wanted to translate something I just wrote on Facebook into Chinese, but I found it really difficult to create the same kind of feeling to the words in Chinese. Please could you read the English version, and then correct my attempt at the Chinese. Maybe also re-write it in a way that sounds more native.
Thank you.

English version:
Can't we just go back in time, hit rewind and then press pause? Everything's so perfect there in your arms, when you kiss me I know where heaven is, and baby I don't ever want to leave. But now I'm here alone, and she's the one you're taking home, why can't you see that should be me? Let's go back, put the night on repeat, cus you and me were meant to be.

Chinese version:
我们可以回到从前去, 按下倒回键, 然后就按暂停吗?
在你的怀里，我的一切都感觉这么完美，当你吻我时，我才知道天堂在哪里，而且宝贝我永远不想离开。
但是现在我一个人在这里，而且她是你陪着回家的人，你为什么看不出那个人应该是我呢？
让我们一起回到从前去吧，坚持重复那个夜，因为我们是命运。

my version:

我们难道就不能及时退回到从前，然后按下暂停键吗？

在你的怀抱里，一切都是如此的美好，当你亲吻我的时候，我感受到了天堂在哪里，感受到我从来没有想要离开你，

但是现在我独自一人在这里，而她却是你要带回家的人，为什么你就不能明白那个她本应该是我？

让我们回到从前吧，重新经历那个夜晚，因为你和我才是天生一对。

well,cause my English is quiet perfect,so the translation is not completely matched,I've tried my best to do it.

by the way ,I made a audio record with your text,so if you are interested in it,you can download it and refer to it  :http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qYzwXGC

Good luck.