你们好! Please check my Chinese pronunciation. 你们好! 请大家帮你纠正读音. Hello everyone! I've recently started learning Chinese and I really need a feedback about my pronunciation. So I recorded a short audio and

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你们好! Please check my Chinese pronunciation. 你们好! 请大家帮你纠正读音. Hello everyone! I've recently started learning Chinese and I really need a feedback about my pronunciation. So I recorded a short audio and ask you to check it and explain what I do wrong. Here is an audio file with my speech: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5b7KON-mUjYbldFRWR2eVhFems/view?usp=sharing Here is the text I read: 很晚了。他，一个人坐着。桌上是空酒瓶子。他和她分手有十个小时了。他只觉得夜很长, 也很凉。。。而她，正坐在火车上，想着他们分手的下午。不记得他们为什么争吵。可是他们都喊出了分手两个字。就这样，他们以分手结束了三年的爱情。 Thanks in advance :)

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Елена, спасибо за комментарий:)

Анастасия, не забывайте больше делать придыхания в 她，他们 и так далее. Иногда слышится как da

you are welcome,good luck:)

Thanks a lot, Xun :)

I am a chinese,and I can totally understand what you are saying without the chinese characters you have writen down,but some mistakes about tone you've made may cause others feel a bit weird,I make a audio record with your speech and you can refer to it,here is the address: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pLEscnL well,I am sorry,I've just tested it,it can't be played online,you have to download it then you can listen to it.

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