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I love to travel and chat with friends. When I have time, I'm quite talkative online. I went to London and Tokyo recently. And I'm planing on my next trip now. It'll be great if I could make some friends from other place then go visit them. If you want to meet new friends and maybe seeing he/she in real life, come talk to me! And I want to be a teacher who teach Chinese in other language. So I would love to talk to any of you.
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    今天的學生

    今天在italki我跟八人的個學生聊天了。 for person, we use (numbers)個。 when 了 is in the end of a sentence, it is a expression of feeling (exciting). I guess you're going to say you talked to eight students. So 了here is past tense. But we only put 了 as past tence in to middle of a verb, for example 聊了天、吃了飯。


    跟一個美國人的對話很有了意思，a conversation with an American is interesting/meaningful . 有意思 is interesting/meaningful. But 有了意思 mean you add some meaning afterward.


    因爲我們說了題目是明天特朗普終于成爲了美國總統。

    因為我們說了明天的題目是特朗普終于成爲了美國總統。 in Chinese,  date or time will put in the beginning of the description . E.g. The topic of tomorrow = 明天的題目。 the exam next week = 下星期的考試。

    這個美國的學生很怕這事情而且覺得自己的國家的前途 前景并不是積極 明朗的。而means but, 而且 means and.  For the future of a person, we can use 前途，but for the future of a company or country, we could only use 前景. Also, positive as 積極 normally use to describe personality, in this case, 明朗 will be much better.


    雖然我是法國人我也很怕這回的總統任期。i don't really understand what do you mean of 總統任期. If you want to say you're afraid of the following years that Trump as president, it will be 大選結果 (the result that Trump as president)


    hope this is helpful!


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    January 19, 2017
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    房间的中央有一张桌子. 桌子上的东西很杂乱. 我说: 你收拾盘碟, 我去煮咖啡. 后来过了一会儿我又说: 把床上的那本书拿走. 把书 去放在书棚上, 好吗？


    后来 means after a period of time, it could be a long period like weeks.

    But when you're saying 'I said "A" then I said "B". It supposed to be just a few minutes (at most).  Then 过了一会儿, 过了一阵子 will be better. They show the time in between.

    Since you're starting another sentence after a while, and both of the sentences are asking he/she to do something for you, put a 又 will be more fluent.

    for the last part, using two 把书blah blah blah is a bit too much. If you want to ask he/she to put the book back, then just use 把在(Place A) 的书拿去（place B） to show readers where was the book and where do you want to put it.

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    January 19, 2017
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