the highest number of merchants and booths

to become famous or successful in a day or very quickly, all of a sudden.

I want to make English very good friends.

Hello,I come from China,I am a student,I am eighteen years old.I have a lot of China Chinese friends in my school. WangYu, she is my beast friend in the school.But she don not doesn't speak English,so me too and neither do I. I am learning to English right now. therefore I want to make my English very good, friends. I want to  more than understand some diffient between China western cultures understand the difference between the Chinese and western cultures more .I very like make come diffient country friends, I would like to make friends from different countries.So I am very working hard to learn English.We can study teach each other and share interesting different life stories.

 lastly, I hope someone people helps me study English,thank you very much.Thank you.

Application letter

Dear sir or madam
I'm writing to apply to study in your university, I read about the admission information while surfing the net, I'm really interesting interested in it.
I'm an outgoing boy and I can get on well with all my classmates ,And I do well in most of my subjects , especially like English,I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies, speeches delivered by famous people like martin Luther king, president Obama and so on , are also my favorite , I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speak of my excellent performances
As we all know ,English is a university language and I like to communicate with different people , so I intend to major in English.  if I am admitted into your university, I want to have a job related with the language in the future I believe I can promote cultural communication between China and the World .
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours,
LIU HAO YANG

Check it please

Dear Mr. Brian Perry,
I`m writing a report about suggesting ways to attract guests to Portsmouth Hotel.
Firstly, our prices are too high, we must apply lower prices than now. What about special offers on weekends? It`s can be concerts and other shows in our conference hall.
Secondly, we have some problems with our service. We haven`t don't have enough members of hotel staff. With bigger staff we can get more opportunities. We can do our room and restaurant services better than now.
Finally, about decoration. In our hotel, decoration in is old-fashioned style. If I were you I would redecorate it in elegant colors.
All these ways can make our hotel more popular than now.

Yours faithfully, assistant Marya.

Please help me with this sentence.

Is it correct to say: We also deal offer cosmetic dentistry services to help you achieve the perfect smile.

Thank you.