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Dear Mr. Brian Perry,
I`m writing a report about suggest ways to attract guests to Portsmouth Hotel.
Firstly, our prices too high, we must apply lower prices than now. What about special offers on weekend? It`s can be concerts and other shows in our conference hall.
Secondly, we have some problems with our service. We haven`t enough members of hotel staff. With bigger staff we can get more opportunities. We can do our room and restaurant services better than now.
Finally, about decoration. In our hotel decoration in old-fashioned style. If I were you I would redecorate in elegant colors.
All these ways can make our hotel more popular than now.
Your faithfully, assistant Marya.
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Dear Mr. Brian Perry,I`m writing a report about suggest ways to attract guests to Portsmouth Hotel. > I'm writing to offer some suggestion on how to attract more customers to our hotel.
Firstly, our prices/rates are just too high, so we should
It`s can be concerts and other shows in our conference hall.??? We can also promote our conference hall as a venue for concerts or other types of events.
Secondly, we have some problems with our customer service. > Secondly, the standard of our customer service is not good enough.
We haven`t enough members of hotel staff.> We just do not have enough staff to provide the standard of service that we want of our hotel.
With bigger staff we can get more opportunities. ??> With a bigger staff force, we can take advantage of the many opportunities that are opened to us.
We can do our room and restaurant services better than now.> For example, with more staff, we can employ them to improve our room service and provide better service in our restaurant.
Finally, about decoration. In our hotel decoration in old-fashioned style. If I were you I would redecorate in elegant colors.
All these ways can make our hotel more popular than now.
> Lastly, we have an image problem. As you know well enough, we have not refurbished our hotel for a long time, and it looks out -of- date compared to other hotels. We could refurbish some parts of our hotel using vibrant colours so our hotel would not look so dull as it is now.
I think the suggestions above can make our hotel more popular than it is now.
Your sincerely,
Ms. Marya.
Administrative Assistant.
Yours faithfully > Used when you do not know the name of the person, when you address them as "Sir" or Madam"
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Dear Mr. Brian Perry,I`m writing a report about suggesting ways to attract guests to Portsmouth Hotel.
Firstly, our prices are too high, we must apply lower prices than now. What about special offers on weekends? It`s can be concerts and other shows in our conference hall.
Secondly, we have some problems with our service. We haven`t don't have enough members of hotel staff. With bigger staff we can get more opportunities. We can do our room and restaurant services better than now.
Finally, about decoration. In our hotel, decoration in is old-fashioned style. If I were you I would redecorate it in elegant colors.
All these ways can make our hotel more popular than now.
Yours faithfully, assistant Marya.
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