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    我每天打坐

    最近我每天打坐至少20分钟。

    我更喜欢在早晨醒的时候静坐,可是不过有时候我(也)在下午或者睡觉前静坐。

    *  These two words “可是” and “不过” both <gs id="a749a8ce-5f69-441c-8294-23a3ddc775d4" ginger_software_uiphraseguid="0f31ce1d-e45e-49fa-915e-f31c70314f6d" class="GINGER_SOFTWARE_mark">mark</gs> an adversative relation, but "可是" is stronger than “不过”. 

    * The word “也” is not necessary, but  it makes the  sentence more  smooth.

    我开始了打坐(是)因为我的工作特别令人紧张,而且我也失眠。 我阅读了一些关于打坐对身体和心理健康好处的文章,决定试一试。 

    * Following a verb, “了” means you have done that. Here, "阅读了”means you have read the articles so that you made the decision of trying. 

    * The word “是” is not necessary, but  it makes the  sentence more  smooth.

    起先打坐很难,可是我再接再厉。 我越练,打坐变的得越容易。

    *The difference between “的”and“得” is even a headache for many Chinese-native speakers. “得” usually follows a verb or an <gs id="fbe60691-c6cb-4ab0-ae26-094286c42ef6" ginger_software_uiphraseguid="44103275-cda8-493e-9e22-e30f04a82d95" class="GINGER_SOFTWARE_mark">adj</gs>. <gs id="f42a157c-c570-41bc-95ec-fe4d99786d96" ginger_software_uiphraseguid="39123c0a-e7ba-4afa-8667-f8b3536b74f2" class="GINGER_SOFTWARE_mark">to</gs> show a degree or a change in degree, such as “变得更容易”<gs id="3457f49d-8529-410e-8e0d-2d4a6edec448" ginger_software_uiphraseguid="39123c0a-e7ba-4afa-8667-f8b3536b74f2" class="GINGER_SOFTWARE_mark">、</gs>“睡得更安静”.

    现在我的心情比以前轻松。我每晚都睡得安静。

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    Hi Therese, I love your writing. It's so clearly organized, and your grammar skills are excellent. The minor changes  I made are only aiming at making it more natural on a native-speaker level.

    BTW, I love meditating in the morning too:)


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    January 10, 2017
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    “夏令营” 的电邮

    小青,你好!

    前不久我跟你说过,我会去北京参加“夏令营”。我昨天刚到家。这段经历很难忘。

    能去北京学汉语和中国文化,我非常开心。在北京,比我先到的朋友和我在机场见面。我们取了我的箱子以后,马上(找了)一家中国风味的餐馆吃饭。我们点了各种各样的北方菜。我们点了北京烤鸭,好吃极了。

    买单以后,我们坐火车到了学校。学校挺大,有三幢宿舍楼,设施非常齐全。我一开始不适应新学校,但是朋友帮我找到了我的教室。因为我几乎每天都和我新交的中国朋友一起玩儿和聊天儿,所以我的普通话水平越来越高。我很爱他们,我的老师和我的新学校。
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    January 10, 2017
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