My plan is to get a driver licence and to read all the books of Dan Brown's in English version(It is very hard for me, but I will get over it :P).
 And I have a question about grammar.
I must say "the book of mine",  but is it also a must in the sentence such like " the books of  Dan Brwon's"? (or just "the book of Dan Brown" ) 

Hi Miss Smith and Effector!

"I am from the planet Shire - a beautiful place wherever covers with green plants. Not like here," it stopped a little while, looked as if it wanted to say something, but the words didn't come out, " I mean, look at here! coverd with silver! What a amazing sight!"

continue, please:)

I think the last sentence should be: Then sweet voice gently touched his ears.
because I cannot say " a voice". Sorry :P

Hi, Miss Smith. Thanks! It does sounds good. And I think I made a mistake, not snow-flower but snowflake. You know in China we call "snow-flower" : )


When suddenly something caught his eyes, it was flying in the air, not far from, not gone with the snow but to draw perfect circles around. It was white, different to the snow, soft, cristal, pure but not sharp. Yes different with snow, Tommy realized the thing cirlcled its way towards him. He hold his breath watching the little tiny white ball coming. A sweet voice came........
Continue, please....:)

Sorry, I must post ti again. Some words are missing during pasting.

Once on a crisp winter day, Tommy was just sitting in his own room seeing every piece of snow-flower floating aimlessly outside of the window.

Once on a crisp winter day, Tommy was just sitting in his own room seeing every piece of snow-flower floating aimlessly.

Forgive my poor English  : )