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Is it important for young people to play sports?
I think it is important for young people to play sports. This is because sports is are good for people's health. When I was a child, I didn't play sports. So, I tended to be sick. In addition, recent studies have shown that children who play sports are more healthier than they those who don't. And sports may give people opportunities to make friends. Generally, sports need some a good amount of people to play. So, if children play sports with friends others, they would become friends. Friends make children's life more fun and more active. Thus, I would like to suggest that playing sports is important for young people.0 votedFebruary 21, 20170[Pocture five]
Could you correct my sentences?If you were me,how would you explain and describe a photo?
I hope to match my description with your imagination.
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This picture shows there are three people in a room who are a guy, a woman, and a boy. The man and the woman are standing who and are wearing black suits.The boy is sitting on a chair who is wearing a eyeglasses , a black tie, and a white shirt.
It seems to be two teachers and a student.
I see many books and texts on a desk. These are piled up there.
The man is grabbing to the boy's wright ear by the man's his left hand.
The photo notices one of the scenes which is examination ordeal or the boy's neglecting. -> I do not understand this sentence.If I were you, I'd modify your sentences:
This picture shows a guy, a woman, and a boy. The man and the woman are standing, wearing black suits. The boy is sitting on a chair wearing eyeglasses, a black tie, and a white shirt. It seems to be two teachers with a student. There are many books and texts piled up on the desk. The man is grabbing the boy's right ear by his left hand.
0 votedFebruary 15, 20170write a short essay in English on what you would like to do after graduating from university
After graduating from university, I'd like to study about the way how to learn languages in graduate school. I often talk to foreigners via Skype to improve my speaking skill. Some of them are not native speakers in of English. But they
are really good at speaking English. So, I've been wondering why Japanese people can't speak English well. Of course, I've tried to learn languages in many aspects. For example, I was trying to learn English with an English-English dictionary. But I don't know whether it is the best way. So, I'd like to try to find the way how to learn languages and contribute to language learners in the world. I think that there must be the best a better way to learn languages.Please try to learn about the English articles - a, an and the.
Do not use 'the way' when you mean 'how'.
0 votedFebruary 14, 20170whether agree or disagree about high schools prohibiting students from carrying cell phones
I am for high schools prohibiting students from carrying cell phones because cell phones might lower students' ability. If we could use cell phones at school, we would use it and wouldn't sturdy. In addition, nowadays we pay more attention to cell phones. So, prohibiting students from carrying cell phones may be good opportunity for us to keep it away. -> UnclearSo, prohibiting students from carrying cell phones may be a good opportunity to prevent them from using them.
0 votedFebruary 11, 20170Could you correct this Ielts writing?
The graph shows levels of rainfall in somecountry in 2004. It can be clearly seen that August and October have the highest average rainfall in the year.
According to the graph, among the average from January to December, the lowest point is July and the percentage is about 37 percent. In addition, during February, March, April, and May, the amount of raining gradually increases. There is slightly decreased average rainfall on June.
In June and August there is a sharp increase and the change is from about 47 percent to about 57 percent, but rainfall on September has much lower average have much lower figures : about 58 percent io November and 52 percent on December. It is recorded the highest average in fall season.
To sum up, the figures for most averages are change from 40 percent to 50 percent, with rare exceptions between July and November.0 votedJanuary 16, 20170
