Could you correct this Ielts writing? The graph shows levels of rainfall in somecountry in 2004. It can be clearly seen that August and October have the highest average rainfall for a year. According to the graph, among the average from January to December, the lowest point is July and the percentage is about 37 percent. In addition, among February, March, April, and May, the amount of raining gradually increases. There is slightly decrease average rainfall on June. Between June and August have a sharp increase and the change is from about 47 percent to about 57 percent, but rainfall on September has much lower average have much lower figures: about 58 percent on November and 52 percent on December. It is recorded the highest average in fall season. To sum up, the figures for most averages are change from 40 percent to 50 percent, with rare exceptions between July and November.