Can you helo me to correct my mistakes? Thx!!= - = Yesterday was a special day for me. Morning, father and me got up early and we went to Xin Cheng Hotel to have a breakfast with my father s friends.We finished it after half hour. They called for him to stayed and have a talked with them.So i have to went home by myself . When i got home it was 11:00am and then I had a rest about ten minutes and then my sister came my bedroom and got me up.She called for me to bought Ipad with her afternoon. I didnt want to went，but I havent other choice.When i finished it, that was 5:00pm.Above wasnt the foucus. The focus was at eleven in the evening. My father knocked at the door of my bedroom while I was playing games and i made no reply to him and then he got angry and shouted at me outside the room.I got annoyed after playing the game.Oh my god. What a terrible day!