Yesterday was a special day for me. In the morning, my father and I got up early and went to Xin Cheng Hotel to have breakfast with his friends. We finished it in half an hour. They asked for him to stay and have a talk with them, so I had to go home by myself. When I got home it was 11:00am and I had a rest for about ten minutes. Then my sister came to my bedroom and got me up. She asked me to buy an Ipad with her in the afternoon. I didn't want to go, but I didn't have any other choice. When we finished, it was 5:00pm. That wasn't the focus though. The focus was at eleven in the evening. My father knocked at the door of my bedroom while I was playing games and I didn't reply. He got angry and shouted at me from outside the room. I got annoyed after playing the game. Oh my god. What a terrible day! If you had written this in the "notebook" section, it would've been easier to correct with formatting. Hopefully this makes sense anyway :)

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