Wild Animals
I’d like to talk about the first time I met a group of dolphins.Last summer I went to Kenting for my holiday with my parents,where the north of Taiwan.One day we went to boating on the sea. Suddenly, the guide told us there was a group of dolphins in front of our boat.People got to very excited and <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">took out their phones to take photos</font> .The dolphins jumped out <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">of the</font> water <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">continuously</font>.It is like <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">they</font> said “Hi” to us. They <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">were</font> so cute and <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">so</font> happy <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">swam</font> in the sea. I was so fortunate<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">ly</font> to have the opportunity to see that. But in the real world the wild animals were trained so that they can give a animal show. In order to train<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">ed</font> the animals they often <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">starved</font> and <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">lived in narrow places where they could barely move</font>. In the animal<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">s</font> entertainment industry, companies <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">were</font> elaborately plan and operate commercial advertisement for animals, misleading that animals were willing to do (clarify) . My view is <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">that </font>people should refuse any animal<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">s</font> show, they belong to <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">the</font> nature <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">but</font> not the zoo or the marine museum.
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