Wild Animals
I’d like to talk about the first time I met a group of dolphins.Last summer I went to Kenting for my holiday with my parents,where the north of Taiwan.One day we went to boating on the sea. Suddenly, the guide told us there was a group of dolphins in front of our boat.People got to very excited and take photos use their phone.The dolphins jumped out to water continuously.It is like to said “Hi” to us. They are so cute and so happy swam in the sea. I was so fortunately to have the opportunity to see that.But in the real world the wild animals were trained so that they can give a animal show. In order to trained the animals they often starving and live in the narrow peace that they could not move a lot. In the animals entertainment industry,companies were elaborately plan and operate commercial advertisement for animals,misleading that animals were willing to do.My view is people should refuse any animals show, they belong to the nature but not the zoo or the marine museum.
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Wild Animals
I’d like to talk about the first time I met a group of dolphins. Last summer I went to Kenting, in the north of Taiwan for a my holiday with my parents,where the north of Taiwan.One day we went to boating on the sea. Suddenly, the guide told us there was a group of dolphins in front of our boat. Everyone People got to very excited and take took photos with use their phones.The dolphins jumped out to of the water continuously. It is was as if they were saying like to said “Hi” to us. They are so cute and so happy swimming swam in the sea. I was so fortunately to have the opportunity to see them. But in the real our world the wild animals are were trained so that they can perform for the public give a animal show. In order to trained the animals they are often starved starving and live in small enclosures where they cannot move freely the narrow peace that they could not move a lot. In the animals entertainment industry, companies were elaborately plan and operate commercial advertisements about for animals, with misleading information that animals are were willing to perform do.My view is people should refuse to go to any animals shows, they belong animals belong in to the wild and nature but not in the zoos or the aquariums marine museum.0
Wild Animals
I’d like to talk about the first time I met a group of dolphins.Last summer I went to Kenting for my holiday with my parents, in the north of Taiwan. One day we went to boating on the sea. Suddenly, the guide told us there was a group of dolphins in front of our boat. People got to very excited and took photos using their phone. The dolphins jumped out to water continuously. It is like they said “Hi” to us. They were so cute and so happy swimming in the sea. I was so fortunate to have the opportunity to see that. But in the real world the wild animals were trained so that they can give a animal show. In order to trained the animals they often starving and live in the narrow peace that they could not move a lot. In the animals entertainment industry,companies were elaborately plan and operate commercial advertisement for animals,misleading that animals were willing to do.My view is people should refuse any animals show, they belong to the nature but not the zoo or the marine museum.0
Wild Animals
I’d like to talk about the first time I met a group of dolphins.Last summer I went to Kenting for my holiday with my parents,where the north of Taiwan.One day we went to boating on the sea. Suddenly, the guide told us there was a group of dolphins in front of our boat.People got to very excited and took out their phones to take photos .The dolphins jumped out of the water continuously.It is like they said “Hi” to us. They were so cute and so happy swam in the sea. I was so fortunately to have the opportunity to see that. But in the real world the wild animals were trained so that they can give a animal show. In order to trained the animals they often starved and lived in narrow places where they could barely move. In the animals entertainment industry, companies were elaborately plan and operate commercial advertisement for animals, misleading that animals were willing to do (clarify) . My view is that people should refuse any animals show, they belong to the nature but not the zoo or the marine museum.Red means that it needs to be deleted it compromises the word or the meaning of the sentence.
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