Day 11. Today, I did cut my hair with perming on side of the head.

Today's wise saying:
Respect a man, he will do the more.

Today I went to go the hair shop (Use salon or barber shop, most who speak English would look at you strangely if you said it this way.) because I want to have my hair cut.
With to have a perm on the side of the head.

When I'm backing (Are you trying to say "When I think back? Because that would work well here and it flows a lot better.) in two years ago. Exactly before going to the Army.

I must cut my hair shortly, just 3cm! 
At that time I promise myself,
After I'm discharged by the Army., I will cut my hair so nice.

And then Many things happened in two years.
I'm stronger than before. I guess.

The outcome of the hair cut is not bad.
Honestly, I wanted it. But by now, I couldn't see anyone.

If my younger sister sees me, How will she react to me about my hair.
I think she will say, "Did you get it cut?"

How to do archery

When I was in Chian, it was hard to explain the poses. I'm going to try now and could you check it is it natural?

1. In one hand, grab a bow, and in the other, an arrow.

2. Stand straight in front of the the target and stand with feet at shoulder width

3. Fit the end of the arrow on the bow's (This feels odd to me, But I'm actually not sure how to fix it.)

4. Pull the arrow

*Make sure Your bow and arrow should be perpendicular. (OR) (Make sure your bow and arrow are perpendicular)

5. Shoot the arrow (Here, I would say "Let go of the arrow, which causes it to shoot" or something to that extent, because "shooting" the arrow seems pretty odd to me)

In any case. Your English is pretty good, just a few nuance things that are pretty hard to remember sometimes. Keep it up~! ^-^

I don't like talking by messenger

I like to meet and talk with other people, but I don't like to talk on the phones. Answering to messages is stressful because I think texts itself cannot convey my exact intention. So I should use excessive emoji with texts? Also, The second reason is that some friends send a lot of text messages that might be insignificant. Because people can check whether their partners read the messages in the messenger I use, I usually do not open the messenger. If they noticed that I check the message but I don't send back a reply, they would have be disappointed.......Sorry my friends ......

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Just a couple corrections, but the language here is very good! Side note, I feel the same way about some things. It's hard to give exact feeling in text messages, however, if you don't like to talk about the phone, you have to text. However, Emoji's are very helpful in giving the feeling you want. Excessive ones are not necessary, but a few every once in a while to help is great! ^-^