Day 11. Today, I did cut my hair with perming on side of the head.
Today's wise saying
Respect a man, he will do the more.
Today I went to go hair shop because I want to have my hair cut.
With to have a perm on the side of the head.
When I'm backing in two years ago. Exactly before going to the Army.
I must cut my hair shortly, Just 3cm!
At that time I promise myself.
After I'm discharged by the Army., I will cut my hair so nice.
And then Many things happened in two years.
I'm stronger than before. I guess.
The outcome of the cut hair is not bad.
Honestly, I want it. But By now, I couldn't see anyone.
If my younger sister sees me, How reaction to me about my hair.
I think she will say, Isn't it cut?
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Day 11. Today, I did cut my hair with perming on side of the head.
Today's wise saying:Respect a man, he will do the more.
Today I went to go the hair shop (Use salon or barber shop, most who speak English would look at you strangely if you said it this way.) because I want to have my hair cut.
With to have a perm on the side of the head.
When I'm backing (Are you trying to say "When I think back? Because that would work well here and it flows a lot better.) in two years ago. Exactly before going to the Army.
I must cut my hair shortly, just 3cm!
At that time I promise myself,
After I'm discharged by the Army., I will cut my hair so nice.
And then Many things happened in two years.
I'm stronger than before. I guess.
The outcome of the hair cut is not bad.
Honestly, I wanted it. But by now, I couldn't see anyone.
If my younger sister sees me, How will she react to me about my hair.
I think she will say, "Did you get it cut?"
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Great job! Good read, and only a few mistakes. Keep it up!! :D
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