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- Social Psychology Today I begin to learn a new subject in my extra curriculum - social psychology. I have learnt some psychology subjects before, and I have been waiting to learn social psychology for a long time. I wanted to learn it because social psychology is very interesting. It's a subject to study behaviors and minds of people in social activities. By learning this subject, we can know how and why people act differently when he or she in a group. What's more, the social psychology teacher is a humorous man, he gave us a funny lecture, including many amazing experiments and stories. I love this class, and hope to learn a lot from it.November 19, 201650
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我回家后也忘不了刚才在地下停车场看到的野猫,所以我对问妈妈问:
'"妈妈,我可不可以去停车场带它回来?"
妈妈很凶地回答:
"你疯了吗?!!"
对。我妈妈怕动物。
待一会儿,妈妈竟然问我,
"如果我答应的话,你会不去中国吗?"
(我估计下个月到北京去。妈妈对这计划不得不答应的。)
我想一想后回答: "嗯!"
"那你带它回来吧。但是你一定要把它关在一个房间,不许让它出那个房间!"
"这算是养它吗? 哈哈--
写得好生动,我都能感受到你和妈妈的心情啦哈哈,而且标点符号用得特别可爱~我都觉得没什么可以修改的了呢~
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我回家后总也忘不了刚才在地下停车场看到的野猫,所以我问妈妈:“妈妈,我可不可以去停车场把它带回来?”妈妈很凶地回答:“你疯了吗?!!”好吧,我妈妈怕动物。待了一会儿,妈妈竟然主动来问我:“如果我答应的话,你会不去中国吗?”(我估计下个月要去北京,妈妈不得不答应这个计划)我想了想后回答:“嗯!”“那你带它回来吧。但是你一定要把它关在一个房间里,不能让它跑出来!”“这算是同意养它了吗?哈哈”
0 votedNovember 18, 20162- Books about India This week, I read 3 books about India. The first one is Half Girlfriend, it's a love story in India. By this novel, I know 2 totally different cities - Dehli and Bihar, one is rich, and the other one is poor. After finished this book, I want to know more about India, so I downloaded two books from Kindle - The Proud India and The Future Nation India. Both of the books tell me many aspects about India, including its history, culture, people, religions, politics and caste system. I am very interested in the caste system, and I read many articles about it. Now, I start to read the fourth book about India. Maybe someday, I will go for a trip to India - a fantastic land.November 18, 201620
有的放矢。
最近我在课本上的内容看到了一句比较有意思的俗语叫:”精诚所至,金石为开”。意思是如果诚心实意,即使像金属和石头那样硬的东西也会被打动。我自己认为生活中我们也需要坚持这个规则,要不然最终还是不会获得成功。
我可以举许多例子。我们可以拿任何科学家来说,他们所有的人为了有所作为而做过了多次尝试,也没放弃!周围的群众都没理解他们的想法,而觉得他们都疯了。但是呢,他们终于得到了成功,因为相信自己的能力和自己事业的正义性。多亏你们的发明我们现在有电气,汽车什么的。
我们要努力实现自己的目标。最重要的是信心。有的放矢
最近我在课本上看到了一句有意思的成语:“精诚所至,金石为开”。意思是说,如果诚心实意,即使像金属和石头那样坚硬的东西也会被打动。我认为,生活中我们也需要坚持这个原则,否则很难获得成功。
生活中有很多这样的例子。拿科学家来说,他们为了有所作为而做了很多次尝试,始终没有放弃。周围的人群不能理解他们的想法,反而觉得他们都疯了。但是呢,他们最终获得了成功,因为他们坚信自己的能力和科学的正义性。多亏了他们的发明,我们现在可以享受电器、汽车等科技带来的便利。
因此,我们要努力实现自己的目标,最重要的是要有恒心。
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这是一篇非常棒的作文,几乎没有语法错误!我修正了一些书面语的表达,仅供参考。
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