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    happy to find this page again! I'm so happy to find this page again! I like writing on italki. But I have an English class now...
    October 25, 2018
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    November 21, 2016
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    First Snow Beijing is raining today, and the rain will turn into snow after midnight. It's the first snow in Beijing this winter. Maybe it would be a white city tomorrow. Wish a good dream!
    November 20, 2016
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    你认为什么是个人隐私?别人问什么内容是不礼貌的?

    我认为个人隐私是不想告诉别人的事情,是属于自己的秘密。别人问年龄、工资、日记内容、书信内容、帐号、密码等个人隐私是不礼貌的。

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    “别人问什么内容是不礼貌的?”

    也可以这样说:

    “问别人什么内容是不礼貌的?”

    “问别人年龄、工资……是不礼貌的。”


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    November 20, 2016
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    Social Psychology Today I begin to learn a new subject in my extra curriculum - social psychology. I have learnt some psychology subjects before, and I have been waiting to learn social psychology for a long time. I wanted to learn it because social psychology is very interesting. It's a subject to study behaviors and minds of people in social activities. By learning this subject, we can know how and why people act differently when he or she in a group. What's more, the social psychology teacher is a humorous man, he gave us a funny lecture, including many amazing experiments and stories. I love this class, and hope to learn a lot from it.
    November 19, 2016
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    November 18, 2016
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    20161118-2

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    我回家后也忘不了刚才在地下停车场看到的野猫,所以我对问妈妈问:
    '"妈妈,我可不可以去停车场带它回来?"
    妈妈很凶地回答:
    "你疯了吗?!!"
    对。我妈妈怕动物。
    待一会儿,妈妈竟然问我,
    "如果我答应的话,你会不去中国吗?"
    (我估计下个月到北京去。妈妈对这计划不得不答应的。)
    我想一想后回答: "嗯!"
    "那你带它回来吧。但是你一定要把它关在一个房间,不许让它出那个房间!"
    "这算是养它吗? 哈哈

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    写得好生动,我都能感受到你和妈妈的心情啦哈哈,而且标点符号用得特别可爱~我都觉得没什么可以修改的了呢~

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    我回家后总也忘不了刚才在地下停车场看到的野猫,所以我问妈妈:“妈妈,我可不可以去停车场把它带回来?”妈妈很凶地回答:“你疯了吗?!!”好吧,我妈妈怕动物。待了一会儿,妈妈竟然主动来问我:“如果我答应的话,你会不去中国吗?”(我估计下个月要去北京,妈妈不得不答应这个计划)我想了想后回答:“嗯!”“那你带它回来吧。但是你一定要把它关在一个房间里,不能让它跑出来!”“这算是同意养它了吗?哈哈”


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    November 18, 2016
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    Books about India This week, I read 3 books about India. The first one is Half Girlfriend, it's a love story in India. By this novel, I know 2 totally different cities - Dehli and Bihar, one is rich, and the other one is poor. After finished this book, I want to know more about India, so I downloaded two books from Kindle - The Proud India and The Future Nation India. Both of the books tell me many aspects about India, including its history, culture, people, religions, politics and caste system. I am very interested in the caste system, and I read many articles about it. Now, I start to read the fourth book about India. Maybe someday, I will go for a trip to India - a fantastic land.
    November 18, 2016
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    有的放矢。

    最近我在课本上的内容看到了一句比较有意思的俗语叫:”精诚所至,金石为开”。意思是如果诚心实意,即使像金属和石头那样硬的东西也会被打动。我自己认为生活中我们也需要坚持这个规则,要不然最终还是不会获得成功。
    我可以举许多例子。我们可以拿任何科学家来说,他们所有的人为了有所作为而做过了多次尝试,也没放弃!周围的群众都没理解他们的想法,而觉得他们都疯了。但是呢,他们终于得到了成功,因为相信自己的能力和自己事业的正义性。多亏你们的发明我们现在有电气,汽车什么的。
    我们要努力实现自己的目标。最重要的是信心。


    有的放矢

    最近我在课本上看到了一句有意思的成语:“精诚所至,金石为开”。意思是说,如果诚心实意,即使像金属和石头那样坚硬的东西也会被打动。我认为,生活中我们也需要坚持这个原则,否则很难获得成功。

    生活中有很多这样的例子。拿科学家来说,他们为了有所作为而做了很多次尝试,始终没有放弃。周围的人群不能理解他们的想法,反而觉得他们都疯了。但是呢,他们最终获得了成功,因为他们坚信自己的能力和科学的正义性。多亏了他们的发明,我们现在可以享受电器、汽车等科技带来的便利。

    因此,我们要努力实现自己的目标,最重要的是要有恒心。

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    这是一篇非常棒的作文,几乎没有语法错误!我修正了一些书面语的表达,仅供参考。

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    November 18, 2016
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    大家好, 晴请帮助我

    I watched a movie for an hour, after that I went to class

    我看了一个小时的电影,然后去上课。
    我一个小时看了一部电影, 之后我去上课

    After I watched a movie, I went to class

    看完一部电影之后,我去上课。
    我看了一部电影以后, 我去上课

    I stopped watching the movie after an hour.

    一个小时之后,我停止了看电影。
    我停止了看那部电影一个小时后。

    Excellent!


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    November 18, 2016
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