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    我在七点半起床。我洗了脸, 刷了牙, 吃了早饭。然后我去上班了。我在8开始工作, 在12点吃午饭。我吃了一个比萨饼。
    下班后, 我学了一小时中文, 然后看了一部电影

    I read your original text. If let me to express it i’ll write it as following:

    我早上七点半起床,洗了脸,刷了牙,吃了早饭,然后我就去上班了。我八点开始工作,12点吃午饭,我吃了个披萨。

    下班后,我学了一个小时中文,接着看了部电影。

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    中国的旅途(<font style="background-color: yellow;">在中国的旅途</font>,或者<font style="background-color: yellow;">一场关于中国的旅行</font>,或者<font style="background-color: yellow;">游在中国</font>,这几种表达,会比<font style="background-color: yellow;">中国的旅途</font>顺一点)

    我去过一次中国。当时我在两个选择之中<font style="background-color: yellow;">考虑</font>,去瑞典玩两三个星期还是去中国学汉语三个月。我觉得去中国<strike>是</strike>省钱,因为欧洲太贵了,并且三个月比三个星期好玩。

    <font style="background-color: yellow;">这</font>是第一次我来亚洲。当时我<font style="background-color: yellow;">待</font>在山东<strike>省</strike>的青岛.带了很多行李。<font style="background-color: yellow;">当然也带了照相机</font>,拍了好多有意思的照片。
    那时我的汉语不怎么样,可是我不怕。办签证,在机场检查行李都没问题。

    除了青岛我还去上海玩<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>两天。我没<strike>参观</strike>(去)北京(参观is right, but we normally don't use it in oral speaking, we just use 去北京 to express "to visit  Beijing)   还有长城也很值得<font style="background-color: yellow;">去玩</font>。

    <font style="background-color: yellow;">我觉</font>得中国的生活很有意思,<font style="background-color: yellow;">并且文化好有特点</font>,我还不想留。(I don' know what's your meaning. it's "but i don't want to stay in there, or "I don't want to leave. if it's the first one, you could use <font style="background-color: yellow;">"但是,我还是不想留在那里</font>”, if it's the second one, you could use<font style="background-color: yellow;">"我还不想走")</font>  三个月后我真想好吃的巧克力和别的甜品!
    我在中国的经验太限制了,真愿意再几次出发中国玩。(if you want to express" The times I stayed in there is quite short , I'm willing to visit China for several times, you can use "<font style="background-color: yellow;">我在中国的日子太短了,我还真想再去玩儿几次</font>。)


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    I'm trying to translate it, if you found any grammarmistake, please tell me , thanks. There are  many idiomatic expressions, such as "SHENG", an old chinese musical instrument. if you don't know what it is, just let me know.

     

    DONG Shuangcheng was a gorgeous girl who lived in Qiantang riverside in Western Zhou Dynasty. She had a witty and beautiful spirit. As the official historian in Shang Dynasty, her ancestor was pure to himself and humble to other people. He also knew lots of things about future and history and made suggestions to the King. After the perishment of Shang Dynasty, Her ancestor moved to the Qiantang riverside. He planted the peach forest at the foot of the Klippe and built a Thatched Hut to  lived in. There was many red and pink flowers around the Thatched Hut in spring.  It was just like a god while you lived in there.
    DONG Shuangcheng was edified by this living environment since she was a little girl. This soft as a osier girl was keen on peach flowers. As DONG Shuangcheng was growing, she was as beautiful as the peach flowers. Oneday, DONG  decided to Refined Dan medicine by peach flowers and the herbs in the mountain in an inspirational flashor. At first, her Dan medicine only could treat some small diseases. After times and times researching and developing of duration and degree of heating and  formula, her Dan Medicine could treat lots of internal diseases. Many people came to her house to seek medical advice and bought the medicine.
    DONG was busy to collecting the meterials and refining the medicines. She also played SHENG to fun herself at the free time. Sometimes, If she was very happy, she would sing a song named "Danxiaofeng". It is said that there were hundreds of birds around her when she plays SHENG. There also were red-crowned cranes to come to listen when she sang.
    Taoism was very popular at that time, the royal people was interested in how to be a god. That is why people like to choose a good environment place to build Thatched Hut. They can enjoy the rosy clouds, feel the spirit of sun and moon and refining medicine by plants. They dream to live without food in this mediocre world and can be a god somedays. Dong and her family  built a Thatched Hut to  lived in and refined the Dan medicine in the foot of Klippe near Xihu. In fact, she is not a Taoist nun. Taoism was not a religion in that time, and it became a religion and began to attract believers after Han Dynasty.Taoism as a theory and Taoism as religion are totally different things. As a religion, it just took some parts of the theory and borrow Lao Zi, the founder of Taoism theory as god.

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    第七份作业



    1. 昨天晚上我在打扫房间呢。
    2. 我已经知道成绩了。
    3. 他要参加比赛了。
    4. 她长得越来越漂亮了。
    5. 他笑着<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">和我</font>说话。
    6. 我的头<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">有点儿</font>疼。(“有点儿”is a degree adverb, and  it's in front of the verb"疼”)
    7. 这个西瓜特别甜。
    8. <font style="background-color: yellow;">这次</font>会议比较重要。
    9. 他聪明极了。
    10. 秋天的风得很大。(there are two ways to express this sentence.1. 秋天的风刮得很大。2.秋天的风很大。 )
    11. 天气还很热。
    12. 我已经到家了。
    13. 他一直喜欢吃西瓜。
    14. 爸爸经常买东西在这个城市。(<font style="background-color: yellow;">爸爸经常在这个城市买东西</font>。)
    15. 他终于决定去游泳了。
    16. 东门,我等你在学校。(我在你学校东门等你 or 我再你学校的东门等你。the “的”between“学校”and"东门” can be omitted.)
    17. 在晚上八点我们结束了会议。he
    18. 他没看过电影很久了。(他很久没看电影了,or 他没看过电影。these two sentences have  totally different meanings. the first one means that  he hasn't watched a movie for a long time. the second one means that he never watched  a movie.)
    19. 在空调下我坐看书。(我坐在空调下看书)
    20. 打扫房间的时候我喜欢唱歌。(我喜欢在打扫房间时唱歌。)

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