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Can somebody help me translate into english? 董雙成本是西同時代錢塘江畔的一位絕色美女,混身上下洋溢著一份靈秀的氣韻。她的先祖是商朝的史官,清虛以自守,卑弱以自持,在朝廷中也偶爾鑒往知來,抒謀獻策。商朝亡後定居錢塘江畔,在飛來峰下種桃成林,結廬而居。每當初春桃花盛開時,嫣紅一片,簇擁草廬,生活在其中不啻是神仙生活。   這種生活環境從小就陶冶著董雙成,體似弱柳的董雙成酷愛桃花,如癡如醉。看看董雙成日漸長大,秀面明眸堪與繁花竟艷。有一天,忽然異想天開,採擷桃花,配以山中的芝草煉製丹藥。初時僅能清痰化氣,日久生巧,屢加研究,逐漸在火候及配方上有了大幅度的改進。所提煉的丹藥,竟然能夠治療多種內科病症,遠遠近近,前來飛來峰下董家討藥的人絡繹不絕。   從採集原料到守爐煉丹,董雙成經常忙得不可開交,偶有閒暇,便吹笙自娛,興致來時還會高歌一曲“丹小鳳”。據說當她吹笙時,會引來百鳥在空中翱翔,而當她唱歌時,更有仙鶴飛來聆聽。   待至黃者之說興起,倡言神仙導引之術,大大符合了貴胄後裔的胃口,於是選擇了風景絕佳的地方,築廬結庵,興寄煙霞,吸取日月精華,提煉百卉的汁髓,以期在碌碌塵世中,能夠不食人間煙火,進而白晝飛升,得道成仙。董雙成隨同家人,在杭州西湖飛來峰下結廬煉丹,不能算是女道士,當時尚無道教之名,真正道家演變成一種宗教,設立道觀,傳授弟子,吸收信徒,是東漢未年的事,道家與道教是兩個不同的概念,道家是一種哲學思想,道教是一種宗教,道教是挪用了道家的一些觀點,更借用了道家的創始人老子來做自己的始祖。

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I'm trying to translate it, if you found any grammarmistake, please tell me , thanks. There are  many idiomatic expressions, such as "SHENG", an old chinese musical instrument. if you don't know what it is, just let me know.

 

DONG Shuangcheng was a gorgeous girl who lived in Qiantang riverside in Western Zhou Dynasty. She had a witty and beautiful spirit. As the official historian in Shang Dynasty, her ancestor was pure to himself and humble to other people. He also knew lots of things about future and history and made suggestions to the King. After the perishment of Shang Dynasty, Her ancestor moved to the Qiantang riverside. He planted the peach forest at the foot of the Klippe and built a Thatched Hut to  lived in. There was many red and pink flowers around the Thatched Hut in spring.  It was just like a god while you lived in there.
DONG Shuangcheng was edified by this living environment since she was a little girl. This soft as a osier girl was keen on peach flowers. As DONG Shuangcheng was growing, she was as beautiful as the peach flowers. Oneday, DONG  decided to Refined Dan medicine by peach flowers and the herbs in the mountain in an inspirational flashor. At first, her Dan medicine only could treat some small diseases. After times and times researching and developing of duration and degree of heating and  formula, her Dan Medicine could treat lots of internal diseases. Many people came to her house to seek medical advice and bought the medicine.
DONG was busy to collecting the meterials and refining the medicines. She also played SHENG to fun herself at the free time. Sometimes, If she was very happy, she would sing a song named "Danxiaofeng". It is said that there were hundreds of birds around her when she plays SHENG. There also were red-crowned cranes to come to listen when she sang.
Taoism was very popular at that time, the royal people was interested in how to be a god. That is why people like to choose a good environment place to build Thatched Hut. They can enjoy the rosy clouds, feel the spirit of sun and moon and refining medicine by plants. They dream to live without food in this mediocre world and can be a god somedays. Dong and her family  built a Thatched Hut to  lived in and refined the Dan medicine in the foot of Klippe near Xihu. In fact, she is not a Taoist nun. Taoism was not a religion in that time, and it became a religion and began to attract believers after Han Dynasty.Taoism as a theory and Taoism as religion are totally different things. As a religion, it just took some parts of the theory and borrow Lao Zi, the founder of Taoism theory as god.

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