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- Ask for correction on IELTS writing task 1 These 2 pie charts illustrate respectively the Australian household energy use and the australian household greenhouse gas emissions. In both charts, water heating makes up about 30% of the total. It's slightly above 30% for the gas emissions. The same phenomenon shows up for the cooling percentage which represent 2 % of both graphs. Turning now to the differences, the lighting and the refregiration portions are 2 times superior comparing the second charts to the first one. Similarly, the other appliances drop to almost the double too. It differs for the heating rate which decreased significantly from 42% to 15%, according to the study. To sum up, despite the fact that heating represents almost half of the energy use in Australian household, it's lighting, refrigeration and the other appliances which reject the most gas in the atmosphere.
December 1, 201620 - Ask for correction on IELTS writing task 2 Education has always been an important question whether for parents and teachers. In my opinion, there are 2 ways to make a children understand what is right or wrong : « the stix and the carrot ». Either you punish him or you give him a reward. But what are the punishment which really work ? As a matter of fact , some punishment can really help the children to be aware of what he does. If he starts to say coarse and his parents demand him to stay in his room for a moment instead of playing outdoor with his friends, the children will realize that it’s not polite to do that. Nevertheless, if the children says something bad and his father gives him a slap or hurt him, perhaps he will understand, but this act can , at some point, have unexpected consequences. As far as I’m concerned, I strongly think that punishment which involve violence don’t work. Those kinds of punishment can subsequently traumatised the children who won’t grow up in a fair way. During a long time, teacher were allowed to hit their pupils but now it’s forbidden because we understood that it doesn’t help them, on the countrary. As a conclusion, even if sometime it’s difficultl to make a children conscious of what he does, punishment which require violence are not the solution. Some sanctions, or interdictions can be as efficient as a slap, even better.
November 26, 201600 - Ask for correction on IELTS writing task 1 The 2 pie charts illustrate the satisfaction of the visitors in Ashdownn Museum the year before and after its refurbishement. First of all, the total number of people jumped from 74k to 92k, between the year before to the year after refurbishement. The portion of visitors who are satisfied or very satisfy represents 45% of the total, either slightly below the half, the year before refurbishment. This purcentage increases significantly the year after refurbishment, because it accounts for 75%. On the contrary, the dissatisfied and very dissatisfied people makes up 50% the year before and only 20% the year after refurbishment. There is a dramatic decline of this amount over a 1 year period. The purcentage of people who don’t response to the survey remains steadily between the year before and the year after the Museum was refurbished.
November 15, 201620 - Ask for correction on IELTS writing task Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. Theys ay that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recyle more of their waste ? The amount of waste from home is in certain developed countries, so huge that the food wasted could fed some entire populations. Recycle is a real issue of our time, and we have to solve it before it’s too late. However, the question is : could it be a viable solution to make recycling a legal requirement ? The way governments currently manage recycling is the following : they suggest people to recycle, making different colours for dustbins, put advertising on the streets or at TV, for instance. The idea is to sensibilize people to recycle, to convince them that recycle is necessary. But is it working ? Yes, but slowly. The fact is that, most of the time, people are lazy to recycle, so the solution could be to forced them to recycle. To make it a legal requirement. As a matter of fact, every law has to be controled to be respected. Nevertheless, how would it be possible to respect people privicy and be sure that they will recycle ? Put cameras on every house and send bills when they throw something in the wrong garbage ? To me, the solution is not to oblige people to recycle, but this kind of laws can eventually work with companies. For example, a law can say that’s it’s illegal to refuse a recycle good for a costumer and not to recycle it, giving as an exchange money to the costumer. But this kind of laws could be not accepted from enterprises. In my opinion, obligating people to recycle is not a good idea. The best idea is to convince them that it’s necessary and not difficult. For example, a startup in France sells a machine which is able to recognize different kind of bottle material (glass,iron , plastic, etc) and does an automatic choose tu put in one dustbin or another. The recycle initiative doesn’t have to come only from costumers but it can come from companies too.November 9, 201640

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