Ask for correction on IELTS writing task 1 The 2 pie charts illustrate the satisfaction of the visitors in Ashdownn Museum the year before and after its refurbishement. First of all, the total number of people jumped from 74k to 92k, between the year before to the year after refurbishement. The portion of visitors who are satisfied or very satisfy represents 45% of the total, either slightly below the half, the year before refurbishment. This purcentage increases significantly the year after refurbishment, because it accounts for 75%. On the contrary, the dissatisfied and very dissatisfied people makes up 50% the year before and only 20% the year after refurbishment. There is a dramatic decline of this amount over a 1 year period. The purcentage of people who don’t response to the survey remains steadily between the year before and the year after the Museum was refurbished.