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¡Hola! Me llamo Brandon y estoy buscando a alguien para practicar español conmigo.Tengo 17 años y vivo en los Estados Unidos. Mi lengua nativa es inglés. No soy muy bueno en español, pero estoy tratando de mejorar. Puedo ayudarte con tu inglés. No dude en me mensaje. See you later! Bye.
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    A great day!

    I woke up <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">at</font></strike> this morning feeling like I could not <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font></strike> get up... feeling<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"> really</font></strike> very sad! I can't explain the reason<font style="background-color: yellow;"> why</font> I felt like <font style="background-color: yellow;">this</font> but I knew if I would get up and <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">would</font></strike> open the window, <font style="background-color: yellow;">that it</font> would <font style="background-color: yellow;">be</font> a great day out side<font style="background-color: yellow;">. </font><font style="background-color: yellow;">T</font>hen I did it!
    It was a beautiful day! Sunny, calm, <font style="background-color: yellow;">and</font> lovely... I met some friends and that was great, because they made me laugh a lot. We went to <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">the</font></strike> Central Park and we watched people going , running, walking, talking, dating... all of them looked happy and see<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> people happy <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">it</font></strike> makes me happy too! Ah! I <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ate</font> the best chocolate today! haha! Seriously! I've never tried something as good as that chocolate <font style="background-color: yellow;">before. </font>hahaha!
    Well, my day was great and I hope that you <font style="background-color: yellow;">had</font> a great day too! Thank you for your time and your <font style="background-color: yellow;">correction</font>.
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    I need someone to correct my article : Everybody needs a friend

    Hi everyone!

    I need someone to correct this article for me . Thanks in advanced.

    Everybody needs a friend.

    What would you do without your bestfriend? Can you imagine your life without them? It's probably impossible for us. I can't live without my best friend called Ana.

    First of all, we met four years ago when we started <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">college</font>. I was really nervous because I didn't know anyone in the classroom. I had always <font style="background-color: yellow;">gone to</font> school in my town, <font style="background-color: yellow;">but it</font> is <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> small <font style="background-color: yellow;">town</font>.

    However, when I talked to Ana and I told her that I lived in Pizarra (my <font style="background-color: yellow;">home</font> town), she knew it <font style="background-color: yellow;">perfectly</font> because her grandmother grew up there. I was <font style="background-color: yellow;">shocked</font>!

    Then , we started to talk every day, go to class <font style="background-color: yellow;">together</font> and go out <font style="background-color: yellow;">on</font> weekends at night.

    Although she isn't <font style="background-color: yellow;">that </font>special to me due to going out to parties or making plans, <font style="background-color: yellow;">but</font> clearly, she is an amazing friend as she always helps me to deal with difficult situations or delicate family issues.

    Finally, everybody has their bestfriend but I think we don't choose our friends for the good moments. We really choose our friends in hard situations because only goods friends stay with you in bad situations.
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    They are both correct. It makes no difference which one you use. But the second word in the sentence "A" shouldn't be there. I think you want to say "they" instead of "A" So the sentence would go like this "If they cross the line first, they will not only be the winners but also a group who has broken two records in a row.
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