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I need someone to correct my article : Everybody needs a friend Hi everyone! I need someone to correct this article for me . Thanks in advanced. Everybody needs a friend. What would you do without your bestfriend? Can you imagine your life without them? It's probably impossible for us. I can't live without my best friend called Ana. First of all, we met four years ago when we started the University. I was really nervous because I didn't know anyone in the classroom. I had always been at school in my town, which is small and unnoticed. However, when I talked to Ana and I told her that I lived in Pizarra (my town), she perfectly knew it because her grandmother grew up there. I was gobsmacked ! Then , we started to talk every day, go together to class and go out at weekends at night. Although she isn't so special to me due to going out to parties or making plans, clearly, she is an amazing friend as she always helps me to deal with difficult situations or delicate family issues. Finally, everybody has their bestfriend but I think we don't choose our friends for the good moments. We really choose our friends in hard situations because only goods friends stay with you in bad situations.

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I need someone to correct my article : Everybody needs a friend

Hi everyone!

I need someone to correct this article for me . Thanks in advanced.

Everybody needs a friend.

What would you do without your best friend? Can you imagine your life without them that person? It's probably impossible for most of us. I can't live without my best friend, called Ana.

First of all, we met four years ago when we started the at (<= in US English, "at" is not used here) university. I was really nervous because I didn't know anyone in the classroom. I had always been at gone to school in my hometown, which is small and unnoticed insignificant(?).

However, when I talked to Ana and I told her that I lived in Pizarra (my hometown), she perfectly knew it well because her grandmother grew (better: had grown) up there. I was gobsmacked (better: shocked, or amazed)!

Then From that day on, we started to talk every day, go together went to class together and go went out at weekends at night on weekend nights.

Although she isn't so special to me due to in the sense of going out to parties or making plans together, clearly, she is an amazing friend as because she always helps me to deal with difficult situations or delicate family issues.

Finally, everyone has their best friend but I don't think we don't choose our friends for the good moments. We really choose our friends in hard difficult situations because only goods friends will stay with you in bad situations (better: will stand by you in both good times and bad).

I need someone to correct my article : Everybody needs a friend

Hi everyone!

I need someone to correct this article for me . Thanks in advanced.

Everybody needs a friend.

What would you do without your bestfriend? Can you imagine your life without them? It's probably impossible for us. I can't live without my best friend called Ana.

First of all, we met four years ago when we started college. I was really nervous because I didn't know anyone in the classroom. I had always gone to school in my town, but it is a small town.

However, when I talked to Ana and I told her that I lived in Pizarra (my home town), she knew it perfectly because her grandmother grew up there. I was shocked!

Then , we started to talk every day, go to class together and go out on weekends at night.

Although she isn't that special to me due to going out to parties or making plans, but clearly, she is an amazing friend as she always helps me to deal with difficult situations or delicate family issues.

Finally, everybody has their bestfriend but I think we don't choose our friends for the good moments. We really choose our friends in hard situations because only goods friends stay with you in bad situations.

hi Antonio,those story are really impressed ..... !.,We always need a friends for the rest of life

Hi Brandon ! Thanks a lot for correcting my article ! I see your point with respect to what I said in my article ! Maybe it doesn't make sense ... What I meant is , on the one hand , she's not the kind of friend you go out with (perhaps she doesn't like going out), so she is not special with respect to this, but on the other hand I think she is an amazing friend as she helps me out whenever I need her ... I may not be putting across the message well xD Anyway, it was very nice of you correcting it ! You're studying Spanish, right? So let's keep in touch and help each other out with our with our languages if you want to ! :-)

You did really good!!! But I don't think gobsmacked is the best word to use lol. Also the second to last paragraph doesn't seem to make sense because you said that she isn't so special to you, but yet she is an amazing friend? I wish I know what you are trying to say?

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