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    Present tense:
    I'm sad. My heart is filled with remorse. I regret the mistakes I have made. Just now, my little baby is playing by herself nearby. My responsibility is to take care of her, but I'm focused on my phone. I don't even notice the razor held in her hands. And then, the accident happens. She hurts herself with the razor, the blood flows out of her lip. She's crying loudly but I am too scared to know what to do. My parents come running into my room to help. My dad held the wound with his fingers, and the blood slowly started to stop. Now my baby is sleeping now. I'm still in the low mood . What happened today is a warm to me ,that I must pay more attention to my baby. I can't put her in dangerous. Now my baby is asleep. I'm still feeling down. What happened today has been a lesson that I must pay more attention to my baby. I can't put her in danger.

    Past Tense:
    I'm sad. My heart is filled with remorse and regret from the mistakes I have made. Just earlier, my little baby was playing by herself nearby. My responsibility was to take care of her, but I was focused on my phone. I didn't even notice the razor held in her hands. And then, the accident happened. She hurt herself with the razor, the blood flowed out of her lip. She cried loudly but I was too scared to know what to do. My parents came running into my room to help. My dad held the wound with his fingers, and the blood slowly started to stop. Now my baby is sleeping now. I'm still in the low mood . What happened today is a warm to me ,that I must pay more attention to my baby. I can't put her in dangerous. Now my baby is asleep. I'm still feeling down. What happened today has been a lesson that I must pay more attention to my baby. I can't put her in danger.


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    November 3, 2016
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    November 3, 2016
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  • Answered
    Perhaps either of these sentences would fit what you're trying to say: "Please send back the part you believe has a problem." "Please send the part, that you believe has a problem, back to me."
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    November 2, 2016
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  • Answered
    They are both correct. You could say "Has it ever occurred to you..." and it would still be correct.
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    November 2, 2016
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