A formal Letter
Could you correct me, please?
Dear Director John
I am writing with regard to your project mentioned “The OLPC” which is offering laptops to our children. This is a good idea for developing countries but
it is not so good for the Third World.
I believe that this
might not be a large benefit to the Third World
because of the
problem of the lack of internet connection. Als
o, the Third World is more concerned abo
ut food, so I personally feel t
hat it is most important is to
give food.I
n conclusion
, I recommend that your project
should focus on developed countries; however,
poor children would still love help.