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Please, help to correct. TOEFL Independent Essay Part 1
In Russia, nowadays the process of research work is in the process is found in various fields of human activity. In my opinion, research in the agricultural sphere is the most demanding among local businessmen and farmers than any other kind of fields. I think this way for two main reasons, that will be explored further on.
To begin with, Russia possesses the biggest territory in the world, including fertile farmlands with many rivers and lakes for irrigation purposes; evergreen vast forests, which are needed to be developed and maintained in a good state. It is widely known that previously agricultural segments used to have first priority in economy of the USSR, however, after the downfall of the great empire in the 1990s more than half of these active farmlands were in decline because no one was left to care for the harvest. leaving no one in charge of the harvest, seeding functions. Therefore, only the Krasnodarsky Region was able to keep the land in a sustainable state condition and give profits to local authorities, which indicated that these lands where highly fertile; this being because the state executives officers did the opposite to those of other state managers, who sold enormous territories to private construction, leaving farmlands without financial support. about highly fertile quality of these lands and reasonability of state executive officers in comparison to those state managers who sold enormous territories to be used for private construction or who left farmlands without financial support. For instance, the village in which I was born that I am originally from can be a proper example of this. The field that is used to be close to my parents’ house once, was in the now the property of the states' agricultural company and , who then harvested every summer they used different crops such as : corn, wheat, pea and many others. Unfortunately, over the years, the field was abandoned and was used by name game for us, children, as a palace to play games and pick delicious plants growing there.Therefore, because of these reasons many of the lands that were previously used in our motherland for farming are now useless and give no profit to the government.
(the second part will be posted tomorrow because I breached the limit for a day)0 votedOctober 24, 20161Please help me to make my English better!
Thank you for your help alwasy! always
This time I wrote about my eating habits and reflected upon the result.
Any correction is appreciated!
My biggest concern after I analyzed my nutrition intake, is my high average intake of sodium. My average intake is 3798 mg which means 65% more than UL. My first thought about the reason The first thought that occurred to me as to why I had such for excessive amount of sodium is, because I eat Japanese food every day, since I was the day I was born. I grew up eating salty dishes with white rice and salty soup of udon or ramen noodle. For example, I would eat miso soup 1-2 bowls every day and add a soy source since all japanese dishes have it. Japanese foods also need soy source for every dish. It made me wonder if Japanese people consume more sodium than western people, and if so, I would like to learn a good way to reduce sodium intake in Japanese dishes to benefit my culture. I also realized that I had a higher magnesium intake than UL, but it is close to my UL; a little bit of awareness about my magnesium, I'll will have to make it go under my UL. I need to keep super tracker a little while longer, to see if it is just temporary for the three days.
Among other nutrients I could not meet the recommended amount, I agree with where the result of vitamin C deficit. When I reflected upon my every day meals, I noticed that I hadnt eaten enough fresh fruit and vegetables for so long. Fiber is also lacking in my daily meals. These are somethings I need to work on to solve the problems; 1) add a fruit and vegetable, 2) replace white rice with brown rice.
My personal experience with supertracker was very beneficial. I am lucky to know that my sodium intake was high, before I developed any serious sodium related diseases. Prevention is always the best treatment, and I can take action to improve my diet from now on. I would like to let my family or friends know the importance of tracking their nutrients in meals.I highlighted some words because, I think they can be modified, but I can't think of something at the moment
0 votedOctober 24, 20161Dad grades
I'm so sad for about my students'repord student's report card now. Last weekends,our school have organized a week test. In my classroom, nobody passed the test. Although, other classes were did terrible as same as such as mine, I'm still very unhappy. I'm angry for over the poor effort my pupils did and my lacking ability less ability and my pupil's inexertion.What should I do?0 votedOctober 24, 20160- In the middle of the episode, a woman is standing on the kitchen counter, dusting the top of a cabinet. When she, then says to the person below her," I just flung a fly covered sponge and I think it landed on Brick's sandwich. Can you get it for me"? I think it depend what you are trying to say . For the example you provide you would just tweak the sentence such as "I will sell that nightstand because it is just sitting there in the corner. You have never used it.0 votedOctober 24, 20165
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