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May 5, 2021
Gracias por tu tiempo Stephen, disfruté mucho nuestra conversación, nos vemos pronto.
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    JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON May.27th

    Yesterday, I was in Arashiyama through throughout/for the day. Arasiyama is famous for being one of the travel destinations you should go at least once if you come to Japan. And It's also popular for being the place where you can see gazillions of leaves in red color red leaves during Autumn, or cherry blossoms in full blooms during Spring. I've ever visited 3 times , but today I thought I like the scenery there after all - But today I thought the scenery was the most beautiful of all (?). That's why I want you to go there if you have a chance to come to Japan. I'm sure you will like the place of Arashiyama. So now, I would love to tell you some points of this place of Arashiyama that I liked. When you visit there, first of all, I would like you to look at the river in Arashiyama, and then, you would be able to see the long bridge made of woods, too. It is so insane. Amazing. I feel like this is JAPAN every time when I visit there. Actually, this place is fiiled filled with tourists, of course they are into taking photos of the scenery. Also So did I, yesterday. I took tons of pictures yesterday. The second point I want to shear share with you is that you can see gazillions of bamboo. It is said like called Bamboo grove road by tourists. It's kind of cool there. I felt yesterday a comfortable breeze in the bamboo grove/forest. Tourists including Japanese went crazy about taking photos. They will also share pictures they took there on Instagram, Facebook or whatever, won't they? Anyway, this place was stunning. Finally, you are able to watch a lot of adorable monkeys! I won't tell you all about it. I want you to see them in person!!


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    May 29, 2017
    3
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    I like reading/to read books!

    I often read books in my spare time,especially before I go/going to sleep. I very much like to read books,  such as biographies about art ,prose and novels. I like novels the most/best, because a good story is very interesting. It can let a person produce lenovo and place oneself among them,it's amazing!Usually I read novels on my days off. I like to read them like a sigh of relief.
    我经常在我空闲的时间看书,尤其是在我睡觉之前。我非常喜欢看书,例如关于一些美术的名人传记,还有散文、小说之类的。我最喜欢的还是小说,常常让人产生置身其中的感觉,很神奇!我常常在我休息的时候看小说,我喜欢一口气读完一本小说。


    Good try! 

    Remember: if you are saying "I like + verb", you have to write (to + infinitive, for example, "to read") or (continuous verb, for example, "reading") 

    From Stephen :)

    0 voted
    May 15, 2017
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    The day to serve my country/Taiwan

    Tomorrow is the day I join the army.
    Being a Taiwanese citizen, it's a great opportunity and great honor/honour (British English) to fulfill my obligation.
    People always debate about (the) military and substitute services.
    Which one is better? Which one is easier? Which one is more masculine? Which one is more useful?
    A lot of my friends still wonder why I want to join the army rather than the substitute service.
    I want peace in my country just like every Taiwanese does.  (new sentence) Joining the army is the way to make/a way of making it come true.
    Being a soldier, preparing to fight. Not because I hate the things in front of me, but because I love the things behind me.


    Nice Article,

    From Stephen

    0 voted
    May 15, 2017
    0
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    The rain

    It's raining again now. I am not sure whether or not I like the rain. It seems that everything in the world gets quiet as it rains and I can't feel anything except the rain. Maybe I've become dull. I don't know how the weather affects human emotion. That's what I feel.

    I think people should like the rain much more in summer, as it makes the air cooler and it doesn't matter if you are in the rain because you become dry soon. Everything looks fresh as though been washed. Welcome to a new world when the rain stops, even eyes been washed. You will/can see a rainbow if you're lucky. It makes me think of a poem by William Wordsworth: the Daffodils. It says, when on my couch I lie, in a vacant or positive mood, they flash upon that inward eye, which is the bliss of solitude, and then my heart with pleasure fills, and dances with the daffodils.

    It seems that I like rain. I like it at this time, anyway. By the way, the heavy rain will come these two days according to the weather report.

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    Nice Article,

    Stephen :)



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    May 15, 2017
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