The day to serve country
Tomorrow is the day I join the army.
Being one of the Taiwanese citizens, it's a great opportunity and great honer to fulfill my obligation.
People always debate about military service and substitute service.
Which one is batter? Which one is easier? Which one is much masculine? Which one is more useful?
A lot of my friends still wonder why I want to join the army rather than substitute service.
I want peace in my country just like every Taiwanese do, joining the army is the way making it come true.
Being a soldier, preparing to fight, not because I hate the things in front of me, because I love the things behind me.
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The day to serve country
Tomorrow is the day I join the army.Being a Taiwanese citizen, it's a great opportunity and great honour to fulfill my obligation.
People always debate about military service and substitute service.
Which one is better? Which is easier? Which is more masculine? Which one is more useful?
A lot of my friends still wonder why I want to join the army rather than the substitute service.
I want peace in my country just like every other Taiwanese, and joining the army is the way to keep it.
Being a soldier, preparing to fight, not because I hate the things in front of me, but because I love the things behind me.
Very well written!
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I am against mandatory military service. In Brazil we have it, but less than 1% of the people in the age group actually have to serve (since they don't need all that many people). Even though they need this few people, even though almost no one has to do it against their will, I am still against mandatory military service and militarism in general.
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The day to serve my country/Taiwan
Tomorrow is the day I join the army.Being a Taiwanese citizen, it's a great opportunity and great honor/honour (British English) to fulfill my obligation.
People always debate about (the) military and substitute services.
Which one is better? Which one is easier? Which one is more masculine? Which one is more useful?
A lot of my friends still wonder why I want to join the army rather than the substitute service.
I want peace in my country just like every Taiwanese does. (new sentence) Joining the army is the way to make/a way of making it come true.
Being a soldier, preparing to fight. Not because I hate the things in front of me, but because I love the things behind me.
Nice Article,
From Stephen
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I just saw this article .You have such a positive attitude and a passion to the world.Best wishes to you ,sunshine boy!
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Such a beautiful dream! I wish your dream come true!
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