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Saya hebat hari ini!
Jadi hari ini adalah hari yang panjang hari itu, tapi bagus hari ini hari yang indah . Hari ini pagi Di pagi hari ini ada banyak pekerjaan, jadi saya duduk di sofa hari ini pagi untuk merencanakan pekerjaan saya di pagi hari . Saya sudah rencanaan merencanakan, saya satu per satu untuk satu-persatu menyelesai pekerjaan saya. Siang ini, semua pekerjaan sudah selesai. Saya lalu Lalu saya menulis panjang mengenai usulan dokumen untuk pelanggan.
tapi saya ada masalah karena email saya tidak mengirinkan terkirim karena beberapa masalah hal. Jadi saya marah dan bawa melemparkan laptop keluar pintu.
Setelah itu, saya merasa sangat senang dan relax rileks.
Tidak ada masalah! Laptop itu saja itu hanya laptop! Jadi beli satu kali!
Oh no! Laptop itu saya pertama itu adalah laptop pertama saya. Tidak ada waktu untuk menangisinya...
Jadi, saya memutuskan untuk meminum segelas anggur dan makan yang sangat enak dan sedap dengan sup yang saya masak kemarin malam.
Terima kasih membaca saya hebat hari!
** If there's a better way of saying, please let me know!0 votedNovember 14, 20161- anyone check my writing please For the last past decades, Global warming is the most worrying problem that every countries were heavily concern about. This has impact to myriads issues including increasing the earth’s temperature, rising sea level, melting polar ice cap and unpredictable climate change. There is no way people can reverse the changes instead of adapt to extreme weather and mitigate the impact. In general, human activity is the most significant factor that worsens the green house effect. The largest known contribution comes from the burning of fossil fuels, which releases some toxic gasses such as carbon dioxide, and nitrous oxide. These gasses accumulating within the atmosphere and causing heat trap. Another cause arising from deforestation that resulting the escalating of carbon dioxide level in the air. This related to tree’s functioned to absorb CO2 from the air and releases oxygen as the result of photosynthesis. Finally, agriculture activity also contributes to this problem. For example, as the growth of agricultural sector in the world it can impact to the increasing of methane production in the atmosphere, which is one of powerful greenhouses gasses. However, personally I believe there are many ways to mitigate greenhouse effect. Firstly, every country have to commit to decrease their emission level. For instance, develop renewable energy sources such as solar power, biothermal, biomass energy and etc in order to replace the usage of fossil fuels. Secondly, government should preserve forest ecosystems and imposing a heavy penalty to illegal logging company. For the last but not least, as individuals we have to be smarter in the way of choosing environmental friendly product such as organic food, electricity-saving bulb, eco-friendly detergent, and using paper bag instead of plastic. In conclusion, global warming effect is non reversible but it can be extenuate as long as government and every people are serious to overcome the situation.November 14, 201600
Please correct my sentence I wrote.
I bought the sticks for mountain climbing a few years ago. But I didn't use it frequently. When I climbed some mountain last month, it had completely broken out. At that time, I swear that I'll never buy some gear in mont-bell which is specialized in mountain gear in Japan.
Although I bought a new one, I went to mont-bell because I was curious that it can be repair or not. I though that if the repairing cost is reasonable, I'll pay it. One week later, I received the answer from the shop. They said it can be fixed with free of charge if I want. I was so glad to hear that. But, I can't still believe completely that the equipment is safe enough when I climb some steep mountains.my suggestion correction:
Few years ago, I bought sticks for mountain climbing equipment, but I did not use it frequently. Last month, the sticks broken when I went to climbed some mountain . At that time, I swore that I will never purchase some gear in mont-bell (A store that specialized in mountain gear in japan) ever again.
Although I bought a new one, I went to the mont-bell because I was curious that it can be possibly repaired or not. I thought that as long as the repair cost is reasonable, then I will pay for it. One week later, I received an answer from the store. They said that it can be fixed by free charge if I want it. I was so glad when I heard that. But, I still can't believe it completely that the equipment will be safe enough when I use it to climb some steep mountains.
0 votedNovember 2, 20161- population problem Based on the result of population projections, there will be a declined in the number of population in the next half century. The changing in the size of population can impact to the myriads of national problems. Nonetheless, the government should take the right step before the emergence of the problem. People who living in the industrial countries are more concern about how to improve their carier, because it is crucial in order to survive in such tight competition. They thinking that having family will only inhibiting their work performance. Thus, it will impact to the many problems. Firstly, the falling of natality which will caused unbalance on the age ratio In the long term. Secondly, these condition can have an affect on decreasing on labour force because of the inadequate of productive-age number. This hitch causes the reduction of taxable incomes. Finally, government must spent a huge amount of budget for medical centre and social services in order to support for elder people. However, there are possible solution to tackle these population problems. The first effective solution is support the new born. For example, japan facilitated the women who give birth by provides free birth-process as well as subsidies their child’s future education. The second resolution is, welcoming the productive migrants. This measure have been adopted to many advanced countries such as Australia, New Zealand and Canada and the immigrants had have been contributed to the growth of economy in these countries. In conclusion, it is immensely important for the government especially in the well-developed nations to take an action in terms of population size management In order to ensure their future economy.November 2, 201620
- Leisure Time For the last past decades, society becomes more centred on city life. As everyone knows that living in the city is not easy. Most of city problems are likely contributed to the escalation of stress level. Therefore, the only way to restore the health of body and mind is by utilizing free time as best as we can. For most of urban people assume that, holiday can be seek as the day to improving their skill, or in other words as a-plus-day to strengthened their ability. For example, students usually join an extra class on their weekend, so they can make sure to always get a good score in school. or the workers prefer to spend their day-off to finish their assignments so they can get compliments from their bosses. So it can be said that, they almost does not have enough time to have a break from their routine instead of putting more burden. However, from my point of view it will be the best for us if we using our free time for recreation. Release all the burden that we have in order to be prime. Keeping of our body health is very important, but keeping our psychologist healthy is also crucial. Thus, if we obliterate the stress away, so we can boost our performance during the working day inevitably. In conclusion, I think that having a good quality time on the weekend is really need to be considered in order to reduce stress as well as maintaining health.November 2, 201600
