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    常常在我买鞋的时候,我先选择我心里想要的那双(pair)鞋。很久很久以前我去买衣服的时候 ,,我找到了那双鞋(I found that shoe.)。  我就进去,说售货员给我那个鞋。 我看看,对,是我想要的那双(it is what I want.)。 我就试了试。 非常漂亮。 我简直不能相信(we don't say我不能相信to express things which are surprised us,add 简直 can make it better)。 我很奇怪了怎么是在这里找到的!!因此有三个颜色,我选择黑颜色的鞋。 我的朋友都很喜欢我的鞋(都对我的鞋很喜欢is not wrong,but we don't actually say that)。 我也很开心(happy)找到了。当然我不可以带在到处,因为我要带 跟服装。(sorry I don't quite get the last sentence)
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    October 16, 2016
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