Can you correct my invitation?

Do you want to come to my party?

Hi! I am Luis Carlos and I am going to have a party in my property on Friday. There will be a lot of different drinks and food, several concerts and a good atmosphere. The party starts at nine o'clock and the admission ticket costs ten euro. The money from the admission tickets will be to cover expenses.

Would you like to come to the party? You're invited.

Wedding routine

Sometimes I think about our marriage. I got married 6 years ago.  I had been dating  my wife since 2003. We work nine-to-five and only see each other at the night. Normally we are tired and talk about the day a little bit before going to the bed. When the weekend arrives, in the same way we got tired through the week we will need to relax and take a rest on Saturday and Monday. Unfortunately it is a routine that keep happening in our life. We are  talking about this and we know that should go out more, to travel together (without children). In short, we need to fall in love more times and enjoy the moments together.