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Can you correct my invitation? Do you want to come to my party? Hi! I am Luis Carlos and I am going to do a party in my property on friday. It will has a lot of kind of drink and food, several concerts and good atmosphere. The party starts at nine o'clock and the admisiion ticket costs ten euro. The money of the admission tickets will be to cover expenses. Would you like to come to the party? You're invited.

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Can you correct my invitation?

Do you want to come to my party?

Hi! I am Luis Carlos and I am going to have a party in my property on Friday. There will be a lot of different drinks and food, several concerts and a good atmosphere. The party starts at nine o'clock and the admission ticket costs ten euro. The money from the admission tickets will be to cover expenses.

Would you like to come to the party? You're invited.
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Can you correct my invitation?

Would you like to come to my party?


Hi! I am Luis Carlos and I am going to have a party at my property on Friday.  There will has a lots of different kinds of drink and food, several concerts and good atmosphere. The party starts at nine o'clock and the admisiion ticket costs ten euro. The price of the admission tickets will be used to cover expenses.

Would you like to come to the party? You're invited.

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