在动漫中我学到了重要的东西。

小的时候我看过很多动画。那时候我不知道美国卡通和日本动漫是不一样的。我记得我看过《七龙珠Z》动漫。我非常喜欢这个动漫。有一个重要的情节，当悟空教他儿子悟饭的时候.悟空告诉儿子：
“力量来自于需求而非渴望。你需要创造这个需求。”
When I was young, I watched a lot of animations. At that time I didn't know that American cartoons and Japanese anime weren't the same. I remember watching the 'Dragon Ball Z' anime. I really like this anime.
There was an important moment when Goku was teaching his son, Gohan. Goku told his son:
“Power comes in response to a need, not a desire. You have to create that need.”

从那一刻，我强烈意识到如果我想要进步很快，需要相信自己，做任何事情都像在生死关头一样（最重要的是你不能允许自己失败）。
我从《火影忍者》动画学了另外一个重要的事情。在动漫里有一个男孩没有擅长的技能。他和另外一个男孩经常战斗。他总是很失望因为另外一个男孩是个天才。他相信:“用最大的努力会超越天才。"所以他每天都在做战斗训练.最后，变得非常强大。（Chinese grammar）
At that moment, I was strongly aware that if I wanted to improve quickly, I needed to convince myself that everything I wanted to do should be treated as if it were a life and death situation. (The greatest motivation, is one where you cannot allow yourself to fail).
I learned another important thing from the anime, Naruto. In this anime, there is a boy who wasn't good at anything. He and another boy often fought with each other. He always lost because the other boy was naturally talented.
He trained every day. Finally, he became very strong. He believed:
“Hard work can surpass a natural genius.”

然而，随着我的成长, 我意识到只努力是不够的，需要一直动脑思考怎么进步。用我过去的经验，我可以了解未来。我应该试着用不同的方式来解决问题或者达到目的。不能再次犯相同的错误。（or不能重复相同的错误）（再次and 重复 are same meaning）
However, as I grew up, I realized that hard work, alone, was not enough, and I needed to constantly use my head to keep thinking about how to keep improving. From my past experiences, I should be able to gain some insight. I should keep trying different ways to solve a problem or achieve a particular goal. You don't need to keep repeating the same mistakes over and over again.

最后，我从火影忍者的主角身上也学了东西。
火影忍者的主角叫旋涡鸣人。他又聒噪又麻烦，经常犯错误。几乎所有人都不喜欢他，所以他很孤独。然而，他进步很快,最终成为一个村领导。（better to write 火影，村领导is very strange and interesting）我觉得我应该像他一样，只要我能进步，人们因为我做错事取笑我没有关系。如果我独自站在人们面前而不害怕，这才是领导的特质。（It‘s strange that write 如果and因为 together in one sentence。）
Finally, I also learned something from the protagonist of Naruto.
Naruto's protagonist is called Naruto. He was noisy and troublesome, and often made mistakes. Almost everyone didn't like him, so he was very lonely. However, he improved quickly and eventually became a village leader. I think if I became like him, when I'm wrong and people start laughing at me, it won't matter to me as long as I can keep improving. If I stand alone and people are staring at me, I won't be afraid because it's a trait of a leader/this is a common situation for a leader to be in.