Please tell me my grammar mistake.
It is rainy today, but I forgot to bring my umbrella. After school I went to my dormitory
to get my umbrella. When I closed my room door, luckily
, the elevator
opened in
a few second
s. I think I’m a little bit rude
, because I quickly press
ed the button “down”
when a girl
wanted to get on the elevator. Then I became
embarassed and said sorry.
*A liitle tip*
It sounds more natural when you use less words. The way you wrote it seemed a little too wordy making it sound unnatural. Hope this helps! ^_^
