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Please tell me my grammar mistake. It is rainy today, but I forgot to bring my umbrella. After school I went to my dormitory took my umbrella. When I closed my room door, very luckily the elevator just slowly closed in few second. I think I’m a little bit rude. Using the most quickly speed I can do to press the button “down”. A girl who standing there was very stun to me/ my action. Then I became blush and said sorry to her.

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Please tell me my grammar mistake.

It is rainy today, but I forgot to bring my umbrella. After school I went to my dormitory to get my umbrella. When I closed my room door, luckily, the elevator opened in a few seconds. I think I’m a little bit rude, because I quickly pressed the button “down” when a girl wanted to get on the elevator. Then I became embarassed and said sorry.


*A liitle tip*

It sounds more natural when you use less words. The way you wrote it seemed a little too wordy making it sound unnatural. Hope this helps! ^_^

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Please tell me point out my grammar mistakes. 我不能跟你講出你的錯誤, 只能表示


It is rainy today, but I forgot to bring my umbrella. After school, I went returned to my dormitory for it took my umbrella. When I closed my room door, very luckily the elevator just slowly closed in few second. 不明你寫甚麽. 以下是我猜的.  As I left and rushed to the elevator, the door was closing.  I had to muster all my speediness to press the down button to prevent the door from closing. I think I’m a little bit rude. Using the most quickly speed I can do to press the button “down”. A girl who standing in there there was very stunned by  to me/ my rash action. I thought I was a bit rude and Then I became blushed.  So I apologized/and said sorry/ to her.
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Please tell me my grammar mistakes.

It was raining today, but I forgot to bring my umbrella. After school I went to my dormitory to get my umbrella. Luckily the elevator door was about to close in a few seconds when I got out of my room door. Using the fastest speed I can I press the button “down”. The girl who was standing there was very stunned at my action. I thought I was a little bit rude. Then I blushed and said sorry to her.
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Please tell me my grammar mistakes.

It was rainy today, but I forgot to bring my umbrella. After school I went to my dormitory and took my umbrella. When I closed my bedroom door, the elevator had luckily  just closed a second ago. I thought I was a little bit rude but as fast as i could, I pressed the  "down" button. There was a girl who who was very stunned to see me.  I  blushed and said sorry to her.

Remember that when you are speaking in the past tense the words change from the present tense for example, 'blush' becomes 'blushed' and 'is' becomes 'was'. Everything I have corrected has been highlighted.

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