much or many ?

Hi Weslayne, I'm not sure what kind of feedback you are asking for here.

I notice that you've repeated some words such as "a lot," and "many."  I underlined those repeats.

Already does not mean many.   Already means that it occurred in the past.  Example:  I already finished cooking dinner.

Uncountable is not the same as countless.  "Uncountable" refers to something that cannot be counted, because it is an abstract concept, such as truth, beauty, justice.  Example:  There is much injustice in the world.

Countless means so much of something that it is impossible to assign it a number.  Example:  There are countless stars in the heavens.

I hope this helps you zero in on what kind of help we can provide you!  Karen

I ate three pancakes for in the breakfast. I wanted ing to eat  have some jello, gelatine, but I forget it.

In my city Caracas, there´s a place where the people can view Hugo Chavez, our late President. [late means dead].   go to see the last dead president.   The name of this place is: "El cuartel de la montaña" (The mountain´s encampment).  If I visited that place, I would crap on the his grave.

Recently "Luisito," a Mexican you-tuber, visited Caracas.  He was robbed in the downtown.  He shared a video which how as he felt as it happened.

During the   At noon, I ate pasta with small pieces of sausage and ketchup.

OR:  During lunch, I ate pasta with small pieces of sausage and ketchup.

OR:  During lunch, I ate pasta with sausage and ketchup.

Alejandro, I separated your sentences, since they are not really related.  I hope you find this helpful.  Karen

Hot Summer

This rise in temperature leads to breakdowns in local generators as well as municipal electricity service.  Lack of power for air conditioning then causes increased human  suffering of the people residents, who avoid go out only for neseceties necessities.  The 
heat wave is expected to continue for nine more days. until it comes to low.This heat wave affecting the  covered  Gulf, Saudi Arabia, Iraq, and Syria.

Note:  "Hottest days ever" means the hottest days in all of recorded history.  "Hottest days of the year" means the hottest days recorded in 2017.  You have to say one, or the other, but not both.

I hope this is helpful.  Karen

Ex. 2

Hi Gordey,

Here is how I would improve your writing:

My friend and I always ride our road bikes on weekends.   A month ago, we chose to do a 50-kilometer ride in our city.  We started in the morning, and finished about 5 or 6 hours later.  I got weaker as the ride went on. (OR:  It was the longest ride I've done in a long time).  Reason:  to introduce what you are about to tell the reader next.

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</s>I was very tired. <s>This road take 5 or 6 hours and I was worn out after that. </s>Later, my body temperature shot up (got higher in a short amount of time) <s>became higher because I was very hot</s>. <s>Very big load declare itself</s>.  The ride was very hard on my body.  I was ill and tired. The next day was better, and after the second night’s sleep <s>sleeping</s> I felt good (I felt good again, OR I felt better).

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<o:p>I hope this is helpful!</o:p>

<o:p>Karen</o:p>