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Maybe this is a title I ate three pancakes in the breakfast. I was wanting to eat some gelatine, but I forget it. In my city there´s a place where the people can go to see the last dead president. If I visited that place I would crap on the grave. The name of this place is: "El cuartel de la montaña" (The mountain´s encampment). Recently "Luisito" a mexican youtuber visited Caracas. He was robbed in the downtown. He tells in a video as he felt when happened it. During the noon I ate pasta with sausage small pieces and ketchup.

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Maybe this is a title

I ate three pancakes for in the breakfast. I wanted was wanting to eat some jello gelatine, but I forgot forget it. In my city there´s a place where the people can go to see/to visit the last dead president. If I visited that place I would crap on the grave. The name of this place is: "El cuartel de la montaña" (The mountain´s encampment). Recently, "Luisito" a mexican youtuber (o es mejor decir : a mexican youtuber named Luisito has visited Caracas. He was robbed in the downtown area . He tells in a video as he felt when happened it. During the noon, I ate pasta with small pieces of sausage small pieces and ketchup.


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I ate three pancakes for in the breakfast. I wanted ing to eat  have some jello, gelatine, but I forget it.

In my city Caracas, there´s a place where the people can view Hugo Chavez, our late President. [late means dead].   go to see the last dead president.   The name of this place is: "El cuartel de la montaña" (The mountain´s encampment).  If I visited that place, I would crap on the his grave.


Recently "Luisito," a Mexican you-tuber, visited Caracas.  He was robbed in the downtown.  He shared a video which how as he felt as it happened.



During the   At noon, I ate pasta with small pieces of sausage and ketchup.

OR:  During lunch, I ate pasta with small pieces of sausage and ketchup.

OR:  During lunch, I ate pasta with sausage and ketchup.


Alejandro, I separated your sentences, since they are not really related.  I hope you find this helpful.  Karen

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