Xiatian he dongtian, ni geng xihuan na yi ge?

Please correct the following sentences:

Wo bu xihuan tianqi hen leng. Danshi wo xihuan xia yu. (But I do like it when it's raining)
Xia yu de shihou wo hen gaoxing (When it's raining I'm very happy)
Yudi dou feichang fansong Yudi de shengyin rang wo fangsong(Raindrops are very relaxing)
Wo ye xihuan tai yang chu lai de shihou. (I also like it when the sun comes out)
Hen duo ren hen gaoxing dang tamen kan dao tai yang. (A lot of people are happy when they see the sun)

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Meitain wo she fa sanshi fenzhong qu paobu. wo meitian dou shizhe pao 30 fenzhong (I try to run for 30 minutes every day.)
Ruguo wo you xuanze, wo hui xuanze xiongmao. (If I had to choose I would choose panda's)

Xiexie! thank you for your help.