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Xiatian he dongtian, ni geng xihuan na yi ge? Please correct the following sentences: Wo bu xihuan tiangi hen leng. Danshi wo xihuan xia yu. (But I do like it when it's raining) Xia yu le shihou wo hen gaoxing (When it's raining I'm very happy) Yudi dou feichang fansong (Raindrops are very relaxing) Wo ye xihuan tai yang chu lai le. (I also like it when the sun comes out) Hen duo ren hen gaoxing dang tamen kan dao tai yang. (A lot of people are happy when they see the sun) -- Meitain wo she fa sanshi fenzhong qu paobu. (I try to run for 30 minutes every day.) Rugou wo you xuanze, wo hui xuanze xiongmao. (If I had to choose I would choose panda's) Xiexie! thank you for your help.

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Xiatian he dongtian, ni geng xihuan na yi ge?

Please correct the following sentences:

Wo bu xihuan tianqi hen leng. Danshi wo xihuan xia yu. (But I do like it when it's raining)
Xia yu de shihou wo hen gaoxing (When it's raining I'm very happy)
Yudi dou feichang fansong Yudi de shengyin rang wo fangsong(Raindrops are very relaxing)
Wo ye xihuan tai yang chu lai de shihou. (I also like it when the sun comes out)
Hen duo ren hen gaoxing dang tamen kan dao tai yang. (A lot of people are happy when they see the sun)

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Meitain wo she fa sanshi fenzhong qu paobu. wo meitian dou shizhe pao 30 fenzhong (I try to run for 30 minutes every day.)
Ruguo wo you xuanze, wo hui xuanze xiongmao. (If I had to choose I would choose panda's)

Xiexie! thank you for your help.
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Xiatian he dongtian, ni geng xihuan na yi ge?

Please correct the following sentences:

Wo bu xihuan tiang qi hen leng. Danshi wo xihuan xia yu. (But I do like it when it's raining)
Xia yu de shihou wo hen gaoxing (When it's raining I'm very happy)
Yudi de luoxia shi wo gandao hen fansong (Raindrops are very relaxing)
Wo ye xihuan tianqi qinglang de shihou . (I also like it when the sun comes out).

Henduo ren kandao taiyang de shihou dou hen gaoxing. (A lot of people are happy when they see the sun)


Meitian wo hui hua  sanshi fenzhong deshijian qu paobu. (I try to run for 30 minutes every day.)
Rugou wo you xuanze, wo hui xuanze xiongmao. (If I had to choose I would choose panda's)

Xiexie! thank you for your help.

 

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Xiatian he dongtian, ni geng xihuan na yi ge?

Please correct the following sentences:

Wo bu xihuan tiangi tianqi hen leng. Danshi wo xihuan xia yu. (But I do like it when it's raining)
Xia yu le de shihou wo hen gaoxing (When it's raining I'm very happy)
Yudi dou rang wo feichang fansong fangsong(Raindrops are very relaxing)
Wo ye xihuan tai yang chu lai le de shihou. (I also like it when the sun comes out)
Hen duo ren hen gaoxing dang tamen kan dao tai yang. (A lot of people are happy when they see the sun)

It would be better if you write the underlined sentence in this way:
Hen duo ren kan dao tai yang shi hui hen gaoxing.
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Meitain Meitian wo she fa hua sanshi fenzhong qu paobu. (I try to run for 30 minutes every day.)
Rugou Ruguo wo you xuanze, wo hui xuanze xiongmao. (If I had to choose I would choose panda's)

Xiexie! thank you for your help.

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hello!I find that you don't make the tone mark,we konw that tone is very important in Chinese.If your keyboard can't make the tone mark,you can do like this"wo3 bu4xi3huan1hen3leng3de tian1qi4".

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