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One day when I was cleaning the house, listening to music, tried to carry the dining table in the corner of saloon to clean its under, it was too heavy and I was alone at home. I used all my energy to move the table, when succeeded got a bad backache, wasn’t able to move. At that time the door bell rang, it should have been my mom who had forgotten bringing her key with herself. I had to open the door so came to door with great difficulty and when opened it, just understood that there was no person at the door and the bell was broken. At the end I couldn’t clean up the house properly and went to bed for one week.
一天我正在打扫房间,听着音乐,试着移开大餐桌,为了擦它下面。那个桌子太重了。我独自在家。耗尽了我所有的能量,当成功开始“腰酸腿疼”(an idiom),动不了了。(就在)那时,门铃响了,应该是我妈妈忘了她的钥匙。我必须得开门,困难地开了门。发现并没有人,而是因为门铃坏了。到底不能干劲好了,一个星期休息。